
12/29/2020 c11 Guest
Great story!
Great story!
7/5/2013 c11
33caldera32
Haha... Peter inspecting the cake under polarized light is a hilarious image...
Felt a bit rushed at the end, but quite enjoyable regardless :)

Haha... Peter inspecting the cake under polarized light is a hilarious image...
Felt a bit rushed at the end, but quite enjoyable regardless :)
11/12/2012 c10 wotumba1
i'm sure the old neal will come back, or at least i do hope so... i miss him already! i mean not that i don't like the new neal and all the chances he has in the future, but still...
i'm sure the old neal will come back, or at least i do hope so... i miss him already! i mean not that i don't like the new neal and all the chances he has in the future, but still...
11/12/2012 c6 wotumba1
like the part of the truth that peter's going with, i do think that's the best approach, stick to the truth but at the time being leave the bad parts out...
like the part of the truth that peter's going with, i do think that's the best approach, stick to the truth but at the time being leave the bad parts out...
4/26/2012 c11
182JackiLeigh
Just read the story. Neal whumpage is always a wonderful thing, so thanks for that. I really enjoyed it.

Just read the story. Neal whumpage is always a wonderful thing, so thanks for that. I really enjoyed it.
12/11/2011 c11 caffrey girl
Awesome story. Beautiful portrayal of Neal. You made me smile with tears on my eyes by the en of it.
Awesome story. Beautiful portrayal of Neal. You made me smile with tears on my eyes by the en of it.
9/29/2011 c11
4LvSammy
Not bad, not bad at all...I really enjoyed this. Thanks for the entertainment.

Not bad, not bad at all...I really enjoyed this. Thanks for the entertainment.
3/28/2011 c11
2MiniMinor
Love this for your first attempt! You have captured the characters idiosyncrasies really well. I look forward to reading the others :-)

Love this for your first attempt! You have captured the characters idiosyncrasies really well. I look forward to reading the others :-)
1/14/2011 c11
3dusty violet
I really enjoyed watching Neal recover his memories and rebuild his relationships... great story!

I really enjoyed watching Neal recover his memories and rebuild his relationships... great story!