for King's Treasure11/23/2010 c15 SeaBreeze2Ga
Very exciting story, I can't wait to read more and to see what you do and come up with next, keep up the great work, I hope you update soon.
SeaBreeze :-)
Very exciting story, I can't wait to read more and to see what you do and come up with next, keep up the great work, I hope you update soon.
SeaBreeze :-)
11/22/2010 c15 
8GoldenRat
I don't believe this! Severus finally gets legal rights to Harry...just after Harry defends himself by bouncing Dumbledore's Obliviate. How is Harry going to escape the Dursleys?
8GoldenRatI don't believe this! Severus finally gets legal rights to Harry...just after Harry defends himself by bouncing Dumbledore's Obliviate. How is Harry going to escape the Dursleys?
11/9/2010 c15 1arynwy
Ah, you just had to complicate things further. *grins* Well, hopefully the little guy will get rescued soon anyway. Or rescue himself. Either way, I look forward to his reunion with Jareth & Severus.
I also look forward to more of Sarah.
1arynwyAh, you just had to complicate things further. *grins* Well, hopefully the little guy will get rescued soon anyway. Or rescue himself. Either way, I look forward to his reunion with Jareth & Severus.
I also look forward to more of Sarah.
11/3/2010 c14 3mishap
In response to your Author's note I have to say that I enjoy a slow paced story. In my opinion it allows for a deeper exploration of the characters and gives you a chance to know them better. I have a problem with stories that the character in question goes from very young to adult or almost adult in only a chapter or two. That's not to say I can't or don't a appreciate a fast paced story on occasion just that I hate feeling like the author just wanted to get to the climax without bothering with the less than exciting parts. Writing like that leaves me with a very superficial understanding of what the author was trying to convey and a fairly strong conviction that they need more practice at writing.
Okay, now that my bit of a rant is over with I would like to say that your story is wonderful and I can't wait to see what you have in store for dear old dumbles. So please keep up the great work and I hope to see more soon.
3mishapIn response to your Author's note I have to say that I enjoy a slow paced story. In my opinion it allows for a deeper exploration of the characters and gives you a chance to know them better. I have a problem with stories that the character in question goes from very young to adult or almost adult in only a chapter or two. That's not to say I can't or don't a appreciate a fast paced story on occasion just that I hate feeling like the author just wanted to get to the climax without bothering with the less than exciting parts. Writing like that leaves me with a very superficial understanding of what the author was trying to convey and a fairly strong conviction that they need more practice at writing.
Okay, now that my bit of a rant is over with I would like to say that your story is wonderful and I can't wait to see what you have in store for dear old dumbles. So please keep up the great work and I hope to see more soon.
10/19/2010 c14 Daenin
I'm enjoying your story very much. I like that Severus is also related to the Goblin King, and the scenes with Sarah are really well done. Lots of emotion, showing how she's slowly growing up and growing more accepting of other ways. I look foward to Harry's rescue, and hope that he gets help with any emotional problems from the abuse.. will his magic act up with him not able to go underground for so long? and if it does, would Jareth or anyone be able to sense it? I also look forward to whatever Jareth does to the Dursleys (and Dumbledore of course, but that evil goat needs a bigger, more nasty end than the Dursleys). Thank you, and it's a lovely story!
I'm enjoying your story very much. I like that Severus is also related to the Goblin King, and the scenes with Sarah are really well done. Lots of emotion, showing how she's slowly growing up and growing more accepting of other ways. I look foward to Harry's rescue, and hope that he gets help with any emotional problems from the abuse.. will his magic act up with him not able to go underground for so long? and if it does, would Jareth or anyone be able to sense it? I also look forward to whatever Jareth does to the Dursleys (and Dumbledore of course, but that evil goat needs a bigger, more nasty end than the Dursleys). Thank you, and it's a lovely story!
10/14/2010 c14 13Unseen Watcher
An impressive fic. I look forward to the reunion. I love Sarah's maturity and the interactions between everyone. Here's to reunion and Dumble whumping.
13Unseen WatcherAn impressive fic. I look forward to the reunion. I love Sarah's maturity and the interactions between everyone. Here's to reunion and Dumble whumping.