for Game Of Fear8/16/2016 c18 Guest
I really like this story, I think it's fascinating, I just hope that you didn't give up on this story
I really like this story, I think it's fascinating, I just hope that you didn't give up on this story
7/6/2015 c1 RanKoudou
I'm not a fan of genre at all but I was curious as to what you would come up with and let me tell you. After reading all those deaths i just want to throw up. Kisame death was so...i dont even like him but the details. I feel sick. Good job on evoking these feelings.
I'm not a fan of genre at all but I was curious as to what you would come up with and let me tell you. After reading all those deaths i just want to throw up. Kisame death was so...i dont even like him but the details. I feel sick. Good job on evoking these feelings.
6/10/2015 c12 SakuraBlizzard20
OH MY GOSHH
THIS STORY IS HORRID BUT I CANT STOP READING
IM A SICK PERSON
OH MY GOSHH
THIS STORY IS HORRID BUT I CANT STOP READING
IM A SICK PERSON
6/9/2015 c6 SakuraBlizzard20
That chapter was very very intense...holy crap.
The "Oni-San!" At the end about had me in a sobbing mess on the floor, so thanks for that.
This is so freaking good!
That chapter was very very intense...holy crap.
The "Oni-San!" At the end about had me in a sobbing mess on the floor, so thanks for that.
This is so freaking good!
6/9/2015 c3 SakuraBlizzard20
This is such an interesting story! I love how it is completely random, meaning that no character is safe. What a good idea!
Can't wait to read more!
This is such an interesting story! I love how it is completely random, meaning that no character is safe. What a good idea!
Can't wait to read more!
3/15/2015 c6 Guest
'his alone because he couldn't het to her in time'
error!
ERROR!
Ok I've completed this chapter and I have to end it there.
I don't see any entertainment ahead of this scene, it's just become rather dull and pointless.
thanks for the read though, it was entertaining up until this point )
'his alone because he couldn't het to her in time'
error!
ERROR!
Ok I've completed this chapter and I have to end it there.
I don't see any entertainment ahead of this scene, it's just become rather dull and pointless.
thanks for the read though, it was entertaining up until this point )
3/15/2015 c4 Guest
'Something's not right in here.'
In where?
I believe you meant to say
'Something's not right here'
yes that is all
'Something's not right in here.'
In where?
I believe you meant to say
'Something's not right here'
yes that is all
3/14/2015 c3 Guest
In this passage you said
On time, instead of in...
I can no seem to be able to select sentences in order to quote you so it looks like I will have to find other ways
line 8... on used instead of in
ok... that and a random " in the middle of nowhere is the only glitch I could find...
In this passage you said
On time, instead of in...
I can no seem to be able to select sentences in order to quote you so it looks like I will have to find other ways
line 8... on used instead of in
ok... that and a random " in the middle of nowhere is the only glitch I could find...
3/13/2015 c1 Guest
You may want to edit that part about bats that came over their heads...
it doesn't sound right at all..
also there is too many said's
you don't have to use any said's or so on, you can simple say
"I like drinking my own urine" Shino leaned in next to Saskura trying his test to flit with her; unsuccessfully
You may want to edit that part about bats that came over their heads...
it doesn't sound right at all..
also there is too many said's
you don't have to use any said's or so on, you can simple say
"I like drinking my own urine" Shino leaned in next to Saskura trying his test to flit with her; unsuccessfully
2/19/2015 c18 
1nellypooo
This has to be, one of the best fanfictions ever! Love, how well this is written
The plot, is amazing! It keeps on surprisings me! Please update! Thank you so much for sharing this fanfic with us!
1nellypoooThis has to be, one of the best fanfictions ever! Love, how well this is written
The plot, is amazing! It keeps on surprisings me! Please update! Thank you so much for sharing this fanfic with us!
1/14/2015 c18 Guest
Please update!
Please update!