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12/18/2010 c3 1Zi-Zhuu
Ha! Good one!
12/18/2010 c2 Zi-Zhuu
—That is quite... strawberry sweet.
12/18/2010 c1 Zi-Zhuu
A good intro, a bit immature but good length... hopefully you weren't forcing yourself.
12/15/2010 c2 scarlet. knots
It seems okayish... but still needs that focus...
11/19/2010 c2 Left.al0ne
Hmm, abit rushed but wonderfully written. :D
10/31/2010 c3 12To. You - From. Me
awww... fluffy!

jkfjkafaek.lncasdkuhcadc sjdycbxbcbyjd f d dfvdmfc... :D
10/31/2010 c2 To. You - From. Me
ya still need to mature . you need to come complexion...
10/31/2010 c1 To. You - From. Me
cjfvakhv... dabjdhuakd
10/25/2010 c3 Passive Priah
-drools and nosebleeds- damn.

heh, update.

. . .can't wait to see what happens nexc.
10/25/2010 c2 Passive Priah
hmm... maybe in the next, himeko wondered if it was a dream? this is just a good avid reader trying to predict and use her schema. -rolls eyes- teachers...
10/25/2010 c1 Passive Priah
woah...temporarily lost my breath, how... powerful...
10/23/2010 c3 Aa'an Ku'iichi
anymore? im curious now. update.
10/23/2010 c3 15We love us
How cool, and hooootttt. ;) I can never say that you didn't surprise me with your...writing. :DD
10/20/2010 c3 Spikesagitta
*thumb up* nice ^^ love it :)
10/17/2010 c3 1Honulicious
hmm i think i'm lost. what was chapter 2 about? was it just a dream? does chikane really sneak into other people's apartments? who called the cops 3x in one night? i'm assuming that himeko was the person who saw the "ghost" but didn't say anything.

When chikane got to the door...who's door was it? himeko's? must have been since she was there and i'm assuming pulled chikane "inside" since she was stark naked in her lingerie. haa or himeko was outside kissing chikane in front of chikane's door! eh...

anyway, just kinda confused about the kissing...if this was not the first time cuz u'v written like it was since himeko didn't reminisce about their kiss in ch. 2 at the beginning of this ch.3.

sorry sorry for all these questions...but i'm really liking this story a lot ;P glad to find out why chikane can't really speak. when u say mute, usually they can't make a sound. but it seems like chikane was in an accident. and now i'm soo curious about what she looked like before and what her real identity is!

update again soon!
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