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7/30/2015 c1 lee
Please update
7/1/2015 c1 7Neverking
A little more story than fucking and I would be great
10/31/2014 c1 Madgormley
Excellent story so far continue please
10/28/2014 c1 uzuuchi007
4/15/2014 c1 KettleValsa
Love the story hope u update and if u need a beta read I can do it
6/5/2013 c1 mattcun
plz write more
3/12/2013 c1 1MrNeedsToRemoveAllFavs
I have no idea what the hell is going on here dude. Run on sentences, what I can only presume are missing words, words that make no sense in the middle of sentences, all sorts of grammar problems, no real coherence of anything resembling a plot.

You NEED either to rewrite this or get a beta reader that can understand where you're coming from.

As it is you jump around a lot, and half the time don't go into anything enough for me to realize what's happening. All I can get out of this is that Kushina is a horrid bisexual (?) uncaring bitch completely unfit for raising a child, she's some sort of vampire, for some reason fell in love with Minato but also hated him (which is a lolwut moment), has Anko and maybe another woman as her slave/lover/childe, and Naruto's used to being naked and fucking even though everyone hates him.
10/26/2012 c1 Ehlonna the Demoness
more much more lots more please...
10/18/2012 c1 Delleren
9/27/2012 c1 1froger495
AWESOME cant wait for the next chapter.
8/24/2012 c1 Doctor Dandy
What? Fuck kushina, she's nothing but trash. You don't keep that shit hidden for years and let your kid get beaten. You sir, are a certified idiot...
8/3/2012 c1 9Dregus
10/12/2011 c1 Bladre MKT
sooo yeah... didnt get it much x.x nice idea, but crazy use XD
6/14/2011 c1 huhu
Only good thing in this fic ... is this epic quote "Sorry Sakura...I got my dick stuck up your mom's ass." ... it's really epic.
5/26/2011 c1 20Blood Brandy
Okay, not the greatest, and could probably do with a re-write, but definitely worth it just for that line, "I got my dick stuck up your mom's ass"
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