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9/2/2010 c2 2QueneB
I am just a little confused...is Andrew Sarah and Jareth's son? or is he toby's? or is he just a kid? other then that great job! update soon please!
9/2/2010 c2 jackiemack916
I am crazy curious to see where this is going.
8/31/2010 c1 1jackiemack916
Wow, that's a really great start. Excellent imagery.
8/31/2010 c1 14satta
I am delighted about the possible intrigue and dangers your prologue introduces to the reader. A myriad of possibilities could commence from hereon: I wager that Seth holds no true love for Jareth. And for some reason I think Andrew's mother might be Sarah. But I guess we'll see it when the story continues. Based on the prologue, the story appears promising. At least I'm curious to see where it leads. :)
8/31/2010 c1 Lynrinth
Nice, very nice. lyrical, flowing, a poem with that tells a light, and a little wicked story. Wicked? Mmmm...kinda got a sense of that. He can be generous, so he thinks and perhaps can be, and could be wicked if pressed the wrong way. I got the sense of a light slash, perphaps? I could be wrong. I love stories like these. Well written, thoughtful, indepth, why can't more be like this?

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