
10/10/2010 c1
14yetti
nice idea, but a bit cheesy... still, everyone loves cheesy.
maybe could have used a bit of editing, but good nonetheless

nice idea, but a bit cheesy... still, everyone loves cheesy.
maybe could have used a bit of editing, but good nonetheless
8/31/2010 c1 awtwin1
great one-shot. I've been waiting for some one to use 'At The Beginning' and I thought you did it perfectly :)
great one-shot. I've been waiting for some one to use 'At The Beginning' and I thought you did it perfectly :)
8/31/2010 c1 LOLChanny819
Hey! This was great! I have to listen to this song! Actually, the reason I read this was because it seemed to fit the song No Air. Great job! SMILES! And go Jordin Sparks!
LOL
Hey! This was great! I have to listen to this song! Actually, the reason I read this was because it seemed to fit the song No Air. Great job! SMILES! And go Jordin Sparks!
LOL