for Fevers4/7/2022 c1 Rita01tx
How scary for a sweet boy to believe God had condemned him to Hell. No wonder he didn't think he had a soul when he woke up!
How scary for a sweet boy to believe God had condemned him to Hell. No wonder he didn't think he had a soul when he woke up!
5/29/2016 c1 Dancing on the Edge of Sanity
You don't have PMs so what happened to the rest of your stories? I like to reread fanfictions sometimes and I was hoping to reread this one and it's not here. Along with "Exposed". What happened?
You don't have PMs so what happened to the rest of your stories? I like to reread fanfictions sometimes and I was hoping to reread this one and it's not here. Along with "Exposed". What happened?
25/7/2015 c1 RubyDee
I wondered what you would do to give this the Savage twist we all know and love. It's the strangest thing, Sav. As a woman in my 60's I have held my fathers hand as he has faced the death of his wife (my mom, of course) 2 brothers, a sister, a son and a daughter within a 4 year time frame. He is the last of his generation, as I am the last of mine. So I'm really feeling Edward's agony, right? And then you throw that last line out and with a bit of a cringe I cannot help but laugh at myself for damn near jumping out of my seat.
I wondered what you would do to give this the Savage twist we all know and love. It's the strangest thing, Sav. As a woman in my 60's I have held my fathers hand as he has faced the death of his wife (my mom, of course) 2 brothers, a sister, a son and a daughter within a 4 year time frame. He is the last of his generation, as I am the last of mine. So I'm really feeling Edward's agony, right? And then you throw that last line out and with a bit of a cringe I cannot help but laugh at myself for damn near jumping out of my seat.
2/2/2015 c1 Guest
yaaaaas
yaaaaas
11/26/2013 c1 Eden
Beautiful piece of work. You manage to make it feel as i your readers are in the room and
are being a part of what is happening. I love it when a writer drags you in so deep.
Just loved this story, except one little bit... it was way to short :)
Beautiful piece of work. You manage to make it feel as i your readers are in the room and
are being a part of what is happening. I love it when a writer drags you in so deep.
Just loved this story, except one little bit... it was way to short :)
8/2/2012 c1 msmargo
oh sad. but good. that flu epidemic must have been horrific. you made it very real.
oh sad. but good. that flu epidemic must have been horrific. you made it very real.