for This Serious Joint7/5/2017 c1 Guest
This is soooooo good I wish you would continue it
This is soooooo good I wish you would continue it
11/11/2011 c1 
8DDAriSieg
Wow, this was really good! But extraordinarily heartbreaking. I would love a follow up that gives SOME sort of hope.. It would tremendously cheer me up.
He.
Well, I loved your characterizations and your general writing style. Pretty awesome!
I'm gonna add this to alerts just in case you make a sequel!
8DDAriSiegWow, this was really good! But extraordinarily heartbreaking. I would love a follow up that gives SOME sort of hope.. It would tremendously cheer me up.
He.
Well, I loved your characterizations and your general writing style. Pretty awesome!
I'm gonna add this to alerts just in case you make a sequel!
4/28/2011 c1 13Amethyst Asheryn
Well, I dunno, I thought it was pretty serious. Maybe that says more about my mindset than your writing, but whichever way you look at it it was very very enjoyable.
Two favorite lines that jumped out at me in particular, both because they just packed a friggin wallop:
"No, stop. Please." - Probably self-explanitory but ... the word "please" just has the ability to tug at my heartstrings that way.
And:
"Well, that's it. I've said all I can and if that's not enough, I'd like to know what is." - Murdock ... has nothing more to say? What have you done?
Really, though, I loved this. This basic overall plot has been used before I think (how could it not? Fanfic writers, myself included, have a disturbing tendency to go for the angst-in droves), but I love the way you wrote it anyway. Especially Face's bit at the beginning when he learns Murdock's been transferred, and Murdock's bit at the end.
Thanks very much for writing.
Ashe
13Amethyst AsherynWell, I dunno, I thought it was pretty serious. Maybe that says more about my mindset than your writing, but whichever way you look at it it was very very enjoyable.
Two favorite lines that jumped out at me in particular, both because they just packed a friggin wallop:
"No, stop. Please." - Probably self-explanitory but ... the word "please" just has the ability to tug at my heartstrings that way.
And:
"Well, that's it. I've said all I can and if that's not enough, I'd like to know what is." - Murdock ... has nothing more to say? What have you done?
Really, though, I loved this. This basic overall plot has been used before I think (how could it not? Fanfic writers, myself included, have a disturbing tendency to go for the angst-in droves), but I love the way you wrote it anyway. Especially Face's bit at the beginning when he learns Murdock's been transferred, and Murdock's bit at the end.
Thanks very much for writing.
Ashe
12/24/2010 c1 20danang1970
This is great - wrenching and so in-character for the team. I'd love to see more of this, but of course it still works as a drabble. I'm just being greedy. :P Thanks for writing!
20danang1970This is great - wrenching and so in-character for the team. I'd love to see more of this, but of course it still works as a drabble. I'm just being greedy. :P Thanks for writing!
9/2/2010 c1 Rhea1305
Okay... erm WOW!
That was amazing. Loved the rapid speech at the end, so much tension.
Please tell me there's more, I may cry if you leave Murdock an insane wreck.
And what about the others in that hospital, the team's gonna say them right? (looks with watery puppy dogs eyes)
Rhea
Okay... erm WOW!
That was amazing. Loved the rapid speech at the end, so much tension.
Please tell me there's more, I may cry if you leave Murdock an insane wreck.
And what about the others in that hospital, the team's gonna say them right? (looks with watery puppy dogs eyes)
Rhea