
5/16 c19 Guest
I'm all for it. I get so annoyed at stories that have foul, loathsome, inbred neanderthals like malfoy not suffering in agony before he dies. I hate (and that's the only emotion that will ever be considered) racists & rapists, whom love using violence to get their rocks off. If there was a way to use magic of anything simar, irl, then I'd make it a crusade to remove every pos like that from the human gene pool.
Sorry, but that leer bugged the fuck out of me & I'm glad to know that his suffering will be thorough.
I'm all for it. I get so annoyed at stories that have foul, loathsome, inbred neanderthals like malfoy not suffering in agony before he dies. I hate (and that's the only emotion that will ever be considered) racists & rapists, whom love using violence to get their rocks off. If there was a way to use magic of anything simar, irl, then I'd make it a crusade to remove every pos like that from the human gene pool.
Sorry, but that leer bugged the fuck out of me & I'm glad to know that his suffering will be thorough.
5/16 c16 A Fan
Hell yeah man! Harry, Daphne, Hermione, Neville, Tracy, Blaise & dear sweet Luna. As well as a good & earnest Dumbledore, whom knows the truth & will help aid them. I'm already putting your story in my HOF.
Thank you so much for writing this! I was hoping for a story with this kind of dynamic. I'll leave more feedback in later chapters now that I know I can be fully immersed.
:-)
Hell yeah man! Harry, Daphne, Hermione, Neville, Tracy, Blaise & dear sweet Luna. As well as a good & earnest Dumbledore, whom knows the truth & will help aid them. I'm already putting your story in my HOF.
Thank you so much for writing this! I was hoping for a story with this kind of dynamic. I'll leave more feedback in later chapters now that I know I can be fully immersed.
:-)
5/16 c14 Guest
YES! It looks as if Dumbledore is a righteous mentor in this one. I'm hoping so at least. I love it when he's displayed as a righteous man, whom has been dealt a terrible hand, for he wishes for the children to be children and enjoy the wonders of youth. But he must guide & mentor the one, chosen by blood & by fate, to bring tranquility to the world.
YES! It looks as if Dumbledore is a righteous mentor in this one. I'm hoping so at least. I love it when he's displayed as a righteous man, whom has been dealt a terrible hand, for he wishes for the children to be children and enjoy the wonders of youth. But he must guide & mentor the one, chosen by blood & by fate, to bring tranquility to the world.
5/16 c8 Guest
I really do hope that Harry and Hermione can remain friends. Her not being accepted by most peers & being a minority in a very bigoted society makes me not like when she's at odds with Harry. Ron is whstever direction the author wants because I can see him as a good friend or a jealous self absorbed halfwit. But Hermione should always be a close friend to Harry.
I really do hope that Harry and Hermione can remain friends. Her not being accepted by most peers & being a minority in a very bigoted society makes me not like when she's at odds with Harry. Ron is whstever direction the author wants because I can see him as a good friend or a jealous self absorbed halfwit. But Hermione should always be a close friend to Harry.
5/12 c11 Guest
I am sure you have heard this before. If you ever decide to write again, and I hope you do, please stop with the very long ramblings at the end of chapters. No one but you cares.
I am sure you have heard this before. If you ever decide to write again, and I hope you do, please stop with the very long ramblings at the end of chapters. No one but you cares.
4/28 c42 mumphie
So many years later and 'Nightmares of Futures Past' never was put back. I don't know what their problem was. Was someone jealous?
I did see it on Royalroad.
So many years later and 'Nightmares of Futures Past' never was put back. I don't know what their problem was. Was someone jealous?
I did see it on Royalroad.
4/28 c41 mumphie
Thank you - I enjoyed your story immensely. Well done!
You haven't written since 2019, so I hope you are okay.
Thank you - I enjoyed your story immensely. Well done!
You haven't written since 2019, so I hope you are okay.
4/28 c37 mumphie
I wish you had had Daphne thank the Creator instead of Gaia. I think it would have fit in better with how Mobius said the Creator stopped him from helping Harry too soon. Since you brought in the Creator, it seemed like it would flow better.
I wish you had had Daphne thank the Creator instead of Gaia. I think it would have fit in better with how Mobius said the Creator stopped him from helping Harry too soon. Since you brought in the Creator, it seemed like it would flow better.
4/27 c32 mumphie
The reporter's name was window? Heh.
I m sorry you have been having a horrible time of it. It's frustrating when the very people you think you can trust with you health and life don't seem to know what they are doing, especially when it come to the pharmaceuticals we are given. Back in the late 90s, my mom was on 18 different prescriptions and, of course, no one kept track to see if the shouldn't be taken together. I, on the other hand, had estrogen fueled cancer, and my hormone inhibitor causes all kinds of issues. Again, frustrating.
I hope you get it figured out and come out in the end better than you can remember! God bless.
The reporter's name was window? Heh.
I m sorry you have been having a horrible time of it. It's frustrating when the very people you think you can trust with you health and life don't seem to know what they are doing, especially when it come to the pharmaceuticals we are given. Back in the late 90s, my mom was on 18 different prescriptions and, of course, no one kept track to see if the shouldn't be taken together. I, on the other hand, had estrogen fueled cancer, and my hormone inhibitor causes all kinds of issues. Again, frustrating.
I hope you get it figured out and come out in the end better than you can remember! God bless.
4/27 c31 mumphie
Why didn't the students or Susan Bones let Amelia Bones know that an illegal black quill was being used on students? I always wonder about that with canon...plus, why wasn't Umbridge arrested in canon? Grumble, grumble...
Why didn't the students or Susan Bones let Amelia Bones know that an illegal black quill was being used on students? I always wonder about that with canon...plus, why wasn't Umbridge arrested in canon? Grumble, grumble...
4/7 c41 Daedric Prince Oedon
while i do like the canon harry and ginny. i truly dp appreciate the harry and daphne pairing. it truly does work and it's a great pairing. I tend to reread this story a lot when im in a harry potter fanfiction mood since its one of my top two favorite harry pairings.
while i do like the canon harry and ginny. i truly dp appreciate the harry and daphne pairing. it truly does work and it's a great pairing. I tend to reread this story a lot when im in a harry potter fanfiction mood since its one of my top two favorite harry pairings.
3/25 c35 Coul532003
first, i just want to say i am enjoying this story, a d thank you for sharing it with us. this is not my first read through of this fic. i know that this is six years after your publishing date, but still wanted to get this out.
It is appalling that some people will take the time to flame an author because they don't like the story, or don't want to read through any errors they may find. i have been reading and re-reading many of these stories for almost a decade. sure there are some that are hard to read because of gramnar or second kanguage authors, but their thoughts are still eorthy of our patience with either cogent and healthy criticism, if we choose I for one enjoy the reafing, and have taught myself to read through (interpret) any grammatical errors i come across. many of them seem to be generated by this website, so are not the author's fault.
Again, thank you for sharing this story.
first, i just want to say i am enjoying this story, a d thank you for sharing it with us. this is not my first read through of this fic. i know that this is six years after your publishing date, but still wanted to get this out.
It is appalling that some people will take the time to flame an author because they don't like the story, or don't want to read through any errors they may find. i have been reading and re-reading many of these stories for almost a decade. sure there are some that are hard to read because of gramnar or second kanguage authors, but their thoughts are still eorthy of our patience with either cogent and healthy criticism, if we choose I for one enjoy the reafing, and have taught myself to read through (interpret) any grammatical errors i come across. many of them seem to be generated by this website, so are not the author's fault.
Again, thank you for sharing this story.
1/7 c35
3uncg4ever
Do you remember in your author's note a few chapters forward where you said you would give a reason for Daphne to legally kill Draco but don't worry there will be no loss of innocence.. WHAT THE FUCK DO CALL MOLESTATION GROPING EXPOSURE OF PRIVATE PARTS TOUCHED BY PRIVATE PARTS NOT A LOSS OF INNOCENCE YOU FUCKIN IDOT! ALSO IT DOES NOT COUNT AS A TRIGGER WARNING IF YOU POST IT BEFORE IN A PREVIOUS CHAPTERS MARKET CLEARLY SO THAT PEOPLE MAY TAKE GREAT CARE I DON'T CARE IF IT'S RATED M FOR MATURE IF YOU CAN'T BE RESPONSIBLE THEN DON'T WRITE STOP DROP DEAD. Also get over yourself you ran a lot in your author's notes.

Do you remember in your author's note a few chapters forward where you said you would give a reason for Daphne to legally kill Draco but don't worry there will be no loss of innocence.. WHAT THE FUCK DO CALL MOLESTATION GROPING EXPOSURE OF PRIVATE PARTS TOUCHED BY PRIVATE PARTS NOT A LOSS OF INNOCENCE YOU FUCKIN IDOT! ALSO IT DOES NOT COUNT AS A TRIGGER WARNING IF YOU POST IT BEFORE IN A PREVIOUS CHAPTERS MARKET CLEARLY SO THAT PEOPLE MAY TAKE GREAT CARE I DON'T CARE IF IT'S RATED M FOR MATURE IF YOU CAN'T BE RESPONSIBLE THEN DON'T WRITE STOP DROP DEAD. Also get over yourself you ran a lot in your author's notes.