for When two Worlds Collide8/11/2011 c2 
9Elsebeth Kindri
OMG! I LOVE IT SO FAR! Anyways. I love how you write. Can't wait for an update.
9Elsebeth KindriOMG! I LOVE IT SO FAR! Anyways. I love how you write. Can't wait for an update.
9/15/2010 c1 8lisakodysam
I like the way you've connected the two Origin stories here, nad I like the fledgling relationship between the two women.
Are you going to continue with this? I really hope so :)
8lisakodysamI like the way you've connected the two Origin stories here, nad I like the fledgling relationship between the two women.
Are you going to continue with this? I really hope so :)
9/5/2010 c1 zunderfeld
Oh, I like the alternating points of view! Nicely done! I am very curious to see how you continue this. We all know the origins story, of course, but I think you have the opportunity for a very unique perspective the way you have begun!
Keep up the writing!
Oh, I like the alternating points of view! Nicely done! I am very curious to see how you continue this. We all know the origins story, of course, but I think you have the opportunity for a very unique perspective the way you have begun!
Keep up the writing!
9/5/2010 c1 4Erynnar
MOAR please! ^_^ Loved that Maker could spread his love around some. I can't wait to see where this is going!
4ErynnarMOAR please! ^_^ Loved that Maker could spread his love around some. I can't wait to see where this is going!
9/5/2010 c1 4Violet Theirin
You story = PURE AWESOME! I am a total fan of your story lines...they are so intriguing! Sorry I didn't review sooner (I wanted to be the first one...DAMN) but for some reason FF didn't send me an alert...stupid internet! Anyway keep up the great work and I'll give this story a shout out on my next chapter (if I ever finish one...laptop broke so I'm stuck handwriting YUCK).
4Violet TheirinYou story = PURE AWESOME! I am a total fan of your story lines...they are so intriguing! Sorry I didn't review sooner (I wanted to be the first one...DAMN) but for some reason FF didn't send me an alert...stupid internet! Anyway keep up the great work and I'll give this story a shout out on my next chapter (if I ever finish one...laptop broke so I'm stuck handwriting YUCK).