for Ice Princess10/22/2010 c24 
3CreateElements
The age changing is actually a good idea because in the Avatar world you are of marring age at 16, so by all rights Katara should be married by now so I think going from 21 to 20 is just fine :)
3CreateElementsThe age changing is actually a good idea because in the Avatar world you are of marring age at 16, so by all rights Katara should be married by now so I think going from 21 to 20 is just fine :)
10/22/2010 c24 Larissa
wow, now that's a cliffie
wow, now that's a cliffie
10/21/2010 c23 7luvnote4u
i liked that ursa was cold. it would have been too easy for her to be forgiving and kind, when honestly ozai doesn't deserve it. you're portrayal makes more sense to me. i also really liked the reunion scene between ursa and azula. there's more to both of these characters than the show let on and you're doing a nice job of developing them further.
suki knows now! now she and toph can scheme and gossip about our starcrossed pair together.
i'm still hoping for a flirty toph, but that is entirely up to you.
update soon. :D
7luvnote4ui liked that ursa was cold. it would have been too easy for her to be forgiving and kind, when honestly ozai doesn't deserve it. you're portrayal makes more sense to me. i also really liked the reunion scene between ursa and azula. there's more to both of these characters than the show let on and you're doing a nice job of developing them further.
suki knows now! now she and toph can scheme and gossip about our starcrossed pair together.
i'm still hoping for a flirty toph, but that is entirely up to you.
update soon. :D
10/21/2010 c23 121Kimberly T
The scene between Azula, Zuko and Ursa was very well done.
The scene between Ursa and Ozai was GREAT.
...Well, Ozai seemed a little out of character, with that line of "I was going to bring you back." When, exactly?
But Ursa... that was the PERFECT response.
I've read fics that had Ursa and Ozai getting back together, but they always made me shudder. Even if she forgave him for the whole ugly business that resulted in her banishment, how could she forgive him for what he later did to Zuko, burning and scarring her son forever just for speaking out of turn? There are some acts that can't be forgiven, and such acts of deliberate cruelty and malice aforethought are unforgiveable. A woman strong enough to commit murder to save her son, would be strong enough to tell Ozai 'I have no husband' no matter how much he begged.
121Kimberly TThe scene between Azula, Zuko and Ursa was very well done.
The scene between Ursa and Ozai was GREAT.
...Well, Ozai seemed a little out of character, with that line of "I was going to bring you back." When, exactly?
But Ursa... that was the PERFECT response.
I've read fics that had Ursa and Ozai getting back together, but they always made me shudder. Even if she forgave him for the whole ugly business that resulted in her banishment, how could she forgive him for what he later did to Zuko, burning and scarring her son forever just for speaking out of turn? There are some acts that can't be forgiven, and such acts of deliberate cruelty and malice aforethought are unforgiveable. A woman strong enough to commit murder to save her son, would be strong enough to tell Ozai 'I have no husband' no matter how much he begged.
10/21/2010 c23 love me
Aww yes you've said it but it touches me every time! Thank you! I love the Zutara moment so sweet! Aww poor Suki she's gonna hate keeping this from the others but i trust Suki I really do. It will be interesting to see how show deals with the secret. It does not surprise me that Aang had to leave and that our favorite firebender had to comfort our favorite waterbender. Just a question but do I sense I slight Taang romance while Aang is away or is that just my Zutara sensors overreacting? Haha well great job as always! I love how quickly you update! And fo anyone who is a Phillies phan LET'S GO PHILLIES!
Aww yes you've said it but it touches me every time! Thank you! I love the Zutara moment so sweet! Aww poor Suki she's gonna hate keeping this from the others but i trust Suki I really do. It will be interesting to see how show deals with the secret. It does not surprise me that Aang had to leave and that our favorite firebender had to comfort our favorite waterbender. Just a question but do I sense I slight Taang romance while Aang is away or is that just my Zutara sensors overreacting? Haha well great job as always! I love how quickly you update! And fo anyone who is a Phillies phan LET'S GO PHILLIES!
10/21/2010 c23 Rememberthetimes
Ahhh stupid suki jkin I love u suki Aww they luv each other I wish they could be 2 gether
Ahhh stupid suki jkin I love u suki Aww they luv each other I wish they could be 2 gether
10/21/2010 c23 5Aipom4
They were about to kiss!
who cares
I don't think Sokka should find out about this.
Who cares
Or Mai…
Who cares
Or Aang.
Who cares:) thank you for the zutara scene, Mai's not even there and she's getting on my nerves...
5Aipom4They were about to kiss!
who cares
I don't think Sokka should find out about this.
Who cares
Or Mai…
Who cares
Or Aang.
Who cares:) thank you for the zutara scene, Mai's not even there and she's getting on my nerves...
10/21/2010 c23 10fuzzyninjaAssassin777
"Hell hath no furry like a woman scorned" like they always say!
Ohhhh Suki...her and Toph are always the characters who catch the other characters in the act and make moments awkward! I think it's so funny ;)
10fuzzyninjaAssassin777"Hell hath no furry like a woman scorned" like they always say!
Ohhhh Suki...her and Toph are always the characters who catch the other characters in the act and make moments awkward! I think it's so funny ;)
10/21/2010 c23 akay2
Oh Suki...way to ruin the moment...but a flustered Zuko is way too cute! Loved it! And Azula's and Ursa's reunion was really good to, and I completely agree with Ursa's coldness toward Ozai...he deserves it. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Oh Suki...way to ruin the moment...but a flustered Zuko is way too cute! Loved it! And Azula's and Ursa's reunion was really good to, and I completely agree with Ursa's coldness toward Ozai...he deserves it. Can't wait for the next chapter!
10/21/2010 c22 love me
I could never kill you! Honestly I think the little love scene between Mai and Zuko was necessary for Mai to perhaps realize she has fallen out of love with Zuko and that she is better with Rahn Jahn. Poor Toph! Stupid Aang. Can't he tell that the girl for him is his natural opposite, closer to his age and has the prettiest green eyes? My eyes are green too and i always wished they were the same beautiful green that Toph's are. And you are so right about why Toph Iroh and Ursa are the biggest Zutara supporters! It's totally true! I can't wait for more (hopefully Zutara) smex and well great job!
I could never kill you! Honestly I think the little love scene between Mai and Zuko was necessary for Mai to perhaps realize she has fallen out of love with Zuko and that she is better with Rahn Jahn. Poor Toph! Stupid Aang. Can't he tell that the girl for him is his natural opposite, closer to his age and has the prettiest green eyes? My eyes are green too and i always wished they were the same beautiful green that Toph's are. And you are so right about why Toph Iroh and Ursa are the biggest Zutara supporters! It's totally true! I can't wait for more (hopefully Zutara) smex and well great job!
10/21/2010 c22 7luvnote4u
wow. there was a lot going on in that chapter!
i love that ursa is hopeful that aang will break up with katara. she's already on the zutara bandwagon. then again, i think she'd be up for anything that'd make zuko happy.
i think the only hope of aang breaking up with katara is if toph learns the subtle art of flirtation and then uses it on the oh-so-innocent airbender (or at least he WAS innocent until recently). honestly, i think that could be hilarious.
as usual, i loved this chapter and implore you to update as quick as you can. :D
7luvnote4uwow. there was a lot going on in that chapter!
i love that ursa is hopeful that aang will break up with katara. she's already on the zutara bandwagon. then again, i think she'd be up for anything that'd make zuko happy.
i think the only hope of aang breaking up with katara is if toph learns the subtle art of flirtation and then uses it on the oh-so-innocent airbender (or at least he WAS innocent until recently). honestly, i think that could be hilarious.
as usual, i loved this chapter and implore you to update as quick as you can. :D