for Ice Princess10/5/2010 c12 
7luvnote4u
the end really reminds me of when katara and zuko were in prison together and they had their little moment and then aang had to go and ruin it.
update soon. but don't hurt anybody while running with the scissors. :D
7luvnote4uthe end really reminds me of when katara and zuko were in prison together and they had their little moment and then aang had to go and ruin it.
update soon. but don't hurt anybody while running with the scissors. :D
10/5/2010 c8 Lauren Ashley
Well, yeah. Who goes off killing my Zutara like that? *Mopes in corner*
Well, yeah. Who goes off killing my Zutara like that? *Mopes in corner*
10/5/2010 c12 121Kimberly T
Very well done! The scene with Zuko trying to reach out to his sister, through the madness to the little girl she had been once, just yanked hard on the heartstrings.
Looking forward to reading more!
121Kimberly TVery well done! The scene with Zuko trying to reach out to his sister, through the madness to the little girl she had been once, just yanked hard on the heartstrings.
Looking forward to reading more!
10/5/2010 c12 3CreateElements
Great Chapter loved it! I think it is a good idea that you are adding the relationship between Aang and katara along with Mai and Zuko even if I don't like the parings :) Just promise us Zuko will not marry Mai :O
3CreateElementsGreat Chapter loved it! I think it is a good idea that you are adding the relationship between Aang and katara along with Mai and Zuko even if I don't like the parings :) Just promise us Zuko will not marry Mai :O
10/4/2010 c11 love me
Hey great chapter! I loved how you incorperated the show in with your ideas for the story. And thanks for acknowledging me in you author notes! You are the first author to do so. As soon as i can figure out how to create an account my first story will be dedicated to you! Great job and take your time with the lemons you write them well and make them seem like a logical part of the story not just randomly tossed into the story. Again great job and keep at it! 3 ;)
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Hey great chapter! I loved how you incorperated the show in with your ideas for the story. And thanks for acknowledging me in you author notes! You are the first author to do so. As soon as i can figure out how to create an account my first story will be dedicated to you! Great job and take your time with the lemons you write them well and make them seem like a logical part of the story not just randomly tossed into the story. Again great job and keep at it! 3 ;)
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10/4/2010 c11 7luvnote4u
this made the whole ordeal sadder for me. i love how you intertwined zuko's old sentiments for his little sister with the crazy lady that he had to fight in the end. it made it more emotional, i feel. nice job.
7luvnote4uthis made the whole ordeal sadder for me. i love how you intertwined zuko's old sentiments for his little sister with the crazy lady that he had to fight in the end. it made it more emotional, i feel. nice job.
9/30/2010 c10 love me
It's good! Update and more lemons asap!
It's good! Update and more lemons asap!
9/27/2010 c9 121Kimberly T
Yeah, the smexing was hot, but honestly, the best part of this chapter for me? Was this:
"So you decided that you would just waltz right in and demand sex?" he blinked.
"Works for Suki." She shrugged.
LOVE IT!
121Kimberly TYeah, the smexing was hot, but honestly, the best part of this chapter for me? Was this:
"So you decided that you would just waltz right in and demand sex?" he blinked.
"Works for Suki." She shrugged.
LOVE IT!
9/26/2010 c10 6Angel15Rocks
awsome please update soon I cant wait to find out what happens next lol :)
6Angel15Rocksawsome please update soon I cant wait to find out what happens next lol :)