for Ice Princess9/26/2010 c10 pyroaquaterrian
Oh, I can't wait to read your version of Zuko's and Azula's Agni Kai... I just hope you don't write Azula completely psycho because Ty Lee and Mai left her, something which I never really bought into. Angrier, defiant, as well as suspicious and mistrusting of other, yes. But completely loony I think not. At least not Azula who quite possibly was the most conniving and smartest character on the show.
Oh, I can't wait to read your version of Zuko's and Azula's Agni Kai... I just hope you don't write Azula completely psycho because Ty Lee and Mai left her, something which I never really bought into. Angrier, defiant, as well as suspicious and mistrusting of other, yes. But completely loony I think not. At least not Azula who quite possibly was the most conniving and smartest character on the show.
9/26/2010 c10 
15camillexelisabeth
Good, as usual, but I spotted a few grammar mistakes here and there. Also, in a few places you used present tense when everything else was in past tense. But otherwise, it was good.
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15camillexelisabethGood, as usual, but I spotted a few grammar mistakes here and there. Also, in a few places you used present tense when everything else was in past tense. But otherwise, it was good.
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9/25/2010 c9 Larissa
keep up the good work :D
keep up the good work :D
9/24/2010 c9 badonyx
Really nice chapter, I really liked the lemon part :]
Aang should really just toughen up, stop being such a baby and do what he's supposed to do. That's what i hate about him, he says he's willing to do whatever it takes but he isn't willing to use any violence at all.
one comment about the age of the gang:
'' Toph and Aang-12 (born in fall), Katara-16 (born in Spring, in other words she just turned.), Suki-16 (born in winter.), Sokka-16(born early winter.). ZUko-16 (born in Summer a few weeks after the comet is his b-day) ''
You say Sokka and Katara are both 16
Sokka is born first in winter and Katara later in spring, that's less than 6 months a part. It takes more than 6 months to have a baby. I guess if you change Katara's age to 15 than everything is fine.
~badonyx
Really nice chapter, I really liked the lemon part :]
Aang should really just toughen up, stop being such a baby and do what he's supposed to do. That's what i hate about him, he says he's willing to do whatever it takes but he isn't willing to use any violence at all.
one comment about the age of the gang:
'' Toph and Aang-12 (born in fall), Katara-16 (born in Spring, in other words she just turned.), Suki-16 (born in winter.), Sokka-16(born early winter.). ZUko-16 (born in Summer a few weeks after the comet is his b-day) ''
You say Sokka and Katara are both 16
Sokka is born first in winter and Katara later in spring, that's less than 6 months a part. It takes more than 6 months to have a baby. I guess if you change Katara's age to 15 than everything is fine.
~badonyx
9/23/2010 c8 Guest
Awwww! Update soon that was so sad and sweet! Awww!
Awwww! Update soon that was so sad and sweet! Awww!
9/22/2010 c8 15camillexelisabeth
Meanie face...just kidding, but seriouslyyy! Do all Zutara fics have to be angsty? Oh wait, that's what makes them awesome. So, in other words, this is completely awesome(:
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15camillexelisabethMeanie face...just kidding, but seriouslyyy! Do all Zutara fics have to be angsty? Oh wait, that's what makes them awesome. So, in other words, this is completely awesome(:
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