9/4/2011 c11 Owley
What a wonderful tribute to him, I think he would be very pleased. You are doing a great job, I can hardly review fast enough to get to the next chapter!
What a wonderful tribute to him, I think he would be very pleased. You are doing a great job, I can hardly review fast enough to get to the next chapter!
9/4/2011 c10 Owley
I am so sorry for all the pain your family must be going thru, it is really hard. Just think how proud your grandfather would be of your writing abilities... you have a very creative mind and you story shows that!
I am so sorry for all the pain your family must be going thru, it is really hard. Just think how proud your grandfather would be of your writing abilities... you have a very creative mind and you story shows that!
9/4/2011 c9 Owley
Looking forward to the next chapter. Feel good about what you have written here, this is a great story!
Looking forward to the next chapter. Feel good about what you have written here, this is a great story!
9/4/2011 c8 Owley
I am very sorry to hear of your Grandfathers passing... hope you and your family are doing well. Your story is one he could be proud of, it is very good!
I am very sorry to hear of your Grandfathers passing... hope you and your family are doing well. Your story is one he could be proud of, it is very good!
9/4/2011 c7 Owley
Yes I totally agree... French is way more romantic than Biology! this is going to get interesting now...
Yes I totally agree... French is way more romantic than Biology! this is going to get interesting now...
9/4/2011 c6 Owley
This is really fun to read. I am enjoying the story and waiting to see what comes next!
This is really fun to read. I am enjoying the story and waiting to see what comes next!
9/4/2011 c4 Owley
This is getting more and more interesting... gotta review fast and get to the next chapter!
This is getting more and more interesting... gotta review fast and get to the next chapter!
9/4/2011 c32 6Maxi Fallon
Awesome chapter! I think it is Carlisle that is Davies familiar! Bella said in her thoughts tha he has been missing for two centurys and Carlisle is the only one who has been around that long! Am I right? Update soon please!
Awesome chapter! I think it is Carlisle that is Davies familiar! Bella said in her thoughts tha he has been missing for two centurys and Carlisle is the only one who has been around that long! Am I right? Update soon please!
9/4/2011 c3 Owley
Wow, that is really good. I love the part about her helping the little owlets hatch... and she can have older brothers, you are the creator of this story, it should be your way!
Wow, that is really good. I love the part about her helping the little owlets hatch... and she can have older brothers, you are the creator of this story, it should be your way!
9/4/2011 c32 5vivx-chan
I loved the chapter, even if it was small and with another cliff hanger.
The timing is a bit off but I think that Emmett is Wyatt brother, because of the fight with Bella in which he won a weapon (a sword if I'm not mistaken).
Keep writing and posting. ^^
I loved the chapter, even if it was small and with another cliff hanger.
The timing is a bit off but I think that Emmett is Wyatt brother, because of the fight with Bella in which he won a weapon (a sword if I'm not mistaken).
Keep writing and posting. ^^
9/4/2011 c2 Owley
Oh my favorite creature ever, owls! That you can probably guess from my "screen name". So this is quite good so far, and I am enjoying it... can't want to learn more.
Oh my favorite creature ever, owls! That you can probably guess from my "screen name". So this is quite good so far, and I am enjoying it... can't want to learn more.
8/29/2011 c31 9LikeYouBelieveInMe100
please, please, PLEASE hurry up and finish this story its awesome and i cant wait to officially review it when ur done! im excited to givew you my opinion!
please, please, PLEASE hurry up and finish this story its awesome and i cant wait to officially review it when ur done! im excited to givew you my opinion!