12/27/2010 c1 19cookie-dough
This was sweet, I loved how Daniel was willing to wait for Betty, and how shy she was to his compliments.
This was sweet, I loved how Daniel was willing to wait for Betty, and how shy she was to his compliments.
10/16/2010 c1 6Lady Babette
Lovely story. Very believable. Absolutely adorable. Love what you did with the characters. Falling asleep in the fort was so cute. Thanks for sharing.
Lovely story. Very believable. Absolutely adorable. Love what you did with the characters. Falling asleep in the fort was so cute. Thanks for sharing.
9/4/2010 c1 3Historianic
This was an absolutely gorgeous little ficlet! Romantic, funny and sweet, and without being trite or cliched. And I actually didn't find Betty OOC. She's grown up a lot and become very confident so I think she probably would have acted this way. And frankly, its very refreshing to see Betty characterization like this. Great work! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this :). Thanks so much for sharing it with all of us.
This was an absolutely gorgeous little ficlet! Romantic, funny and sweet, and without being trite or cliched. And I actually didn't find Betty OOC. She's grown up a lot and become very confident so I think she probably would have acted this way. And frankly, its very refreshing to see Betty characterization like this. Great work! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this :). Thanks so much for sharing it with all of us.
9/4/2010 c1 TMadison
I think you did a great job. I love this story...please keep writing. It was so sweet. I can see this happening on the show. They bring out the goofy in each other. Well done.
I think you did a great job. I love this story...please keep writing. It was so sweet. I can see this happening on the show. They bring out the goofy in each other. Well done.
9/4/2010 c1 Jamie
Ahhh. Cuteness
Ahhh. Cuteness
9/4/2010 c1 The Wigmeister
Beauiful. I absolutely ADORE this piece. I think you wrote them marvelously well. I always love to see them at their fun, child-like best and they were both cute and adorable, especially Daniel. It does not for one bit seem OOC to me. I could quote you the parts I really loved, but then I'd just be quoting the whole bloody thing lmao.
One of the fics I've enjoyed immensely! I encourage you to write more!
Beauiful. I absolutely ADORE this piece. I think you wrote them marvelously well. I always love to see them at their fun, child-like best and they were both cute and adorable, especially Daniel. It does not for one bit seem OOC to me. I could quote you the parts I really loved, but then I'd just be quoting the whole bloody thing lmao.
One of the fics I've enjoyed immensely! I encourage you to write more!