
10/6/2014 c5 cybercorpsesnake
Every couple has arguments. They should really tell the others. A baby bump is not the best way to tell them the two of them are in a relationship.
Well written story. Keep up the good work.
Every couple has arguments. They should really tell the others. A baby bump is not the best way to tell them the two of them are in a relationship.
Well written story. Keep up the good work.
10/6/2014 c4 cybercorpsesnake
Loved this chapter. Incredible romance. Just needs work on the paragraph at the start. Very nice kiss at the end.
Looking forward to next chapter. Keep up the good work.
Loved this chapter. Incredible romance. Just needs work on the paragraph at the start. Very nice kiss at the end.
Looking forward to next chapter. Keep up the good work.
10/6/2014 c3 cybercorpsesnake
Nice moment with the couple. They are quite cute together. Keep up the good work.
Nice moment with the couple. They are quite cute together. Keep up the good work.
10/6/2014 c2 cybercorpsesnake
Such haunting nightmares would be terrible. They are quite cute together. Logan will have to fix that door after breaking into a girls room.
Looking forward to next chapter. Keep up the good work.
Such haunting nightmares would be terrible. They are quite cute together. Logan will have to fix that door after breaking into a girls room.
Looking forward to next chapter. Keep up the good work.
10/6/2014 c1 cybercorpsesnake
Fantastic chapter. Well written. Looking forward to next chapter. Keep up the good work.
Fantastic chapter. Well written. Looking forward to next chapter. Keep up the good work.
5/28/2013 c5
25MercyFrost
You serious? Who leaves off a story there? Finish it! Show a little humanity, finish it! You can't leave it there! Please for Pete's sake finish it!

You serious? Who leaves off a story there? Finish it! Show a little humanity, finish it! You can't leave it there! Please for Pete's sake finish it!
5/17/2011 c5
1CrisTocK
good history nothing fancy no shit chat
just sweet and clear
hope you keep updating anytime soon
Cya

good history nothing fancy no shit chat
just sweet and clear
hope you keep updating anytime soon
Cya
10/10/2010 c5 Missy
Swoooon 3 more, more, more!
Swoooon 3 more, more, more!