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7/23/2016 c1 4Death's Domain
that was good keep the chapters coming

No, just no. Please put more effort into reviews.
6/4/2016 c1 bldkdfjdodjijfjffkd
that was good keep the chapters coming
3/20/2016 c1 Oc
that was good keep the chapters coming

NO IT'S NOT GOOD!

Tragedy will never ever be 'that was good keep the chapters coming' that you read child!

Stupid Elredar Skylance!
12/12/2012 c1 15Adrian's little Dhampir girl
Please continue this. I am confused but I love the summary. I see it was posted in 2010 and that was so long ago :(

Please continue. I would love to read it. I don't read a lot of FanFics. I write FanFics more than I read them but every so often, I do read a few and this is definitely one I am interested in. Please continue.
1/21/2012 c1 Jade926
Update soon
1/11/2012 c1 Ghoul99
Update please you can wright more then that!
10/16/2011 c1 DimkavsRoza
Sounds good! But will be even better with longer and sooner updates:-) ThanX
6/10/2011 c1 Animechick64
chapters need to be longer but good start
6/1/2011 c1 2Jo Salvatore
this is just constructive critisism...it's a very good start just be careful of past/present because sometimes you switched back and forth between them. Some users were also commenting that it was too short...well some chapters can be short, ive read books where there may be one chapter like tht. Like in New Moon (by:stephanie meyer) for instance.
5/16/2011 c1 PotterVampireFan
good
1/30/2011 c1 102Harmony'sLoveHP
I'm sorry if this sounds mean, but the story has nothing to do with the story. Too short too. Are you going to update? It might make the story better. Good start.
12/14/2010 c1 4CherryKyun
Awesome start. A little short though. Keep it coming please.
10/15/2010 c1 BehindGlassHouses
like it. but 2 short
9/25/2010 c1 2ImaCreeper-FISH
That was lame
9/14/2010 c1 4Mrs.Quinn-Fuentes
i like where this is going =) update soon KIMMIE xxx
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