for she needs him7/23/2016 c1 
4Death's Domain
that was good keep the chapters coming
No, just no. Please put more effort into reviews.
4Death's Domainthat was good keep the chapters coming
No, just no. Please put more effort into reviews.
3/20/2016 c1 Oc
that was good keep the chapters coming
NO IT'S NOT GOOD!
Tragedy will never ever be 'that was good keep the chapters coming' that you read child!
Stupid Elredar Skylance!
that was good keep the chapters coming
NO IT'S NOT GOOD!
Tragedy will never ever be 'that was good keep the chapters coming' that you read child!
Stupid Elredar Skylance!
12/12/2012 c1 15Adrian's little Dhampir girl
Please continue this. I am confused but I love the summary. I see it was posted in 2010 and that was so long ago :(
Please continue. I would love to read it. I don't read a lot of FanFics. I write FanFics more than I read them but every so often, I do read a few and this is definitely one I am interested in. Please continue.
15Adrian's little Dhampir girlPlease continue this. I am confused but I love the summary. I see it was posted in 2010 and that was so long ago :(
Please continue. I would love to read it. I don't read a lot of FanFics. I write FanFics more than I read them but every so often, I do read a few and this is definitely one I am interested in. Please continue.
10/16/2011 c1 DimkavsRoza
Sounds good! But will be even better with longer and sooner updates:-) ThanX
Sounds good! But will be even better with longer and sooner updates:-) ThanX
6/1/2011 c1 2Jo Salvatore
this is just constructive critisism...it's a very good start just be careful of past/present because sometimes you switched back and forth between them. Some users were also commenting that it was too short...well some chapters can be short, ive read books where there may be one chapter like tht. Like in New Moon (by:stephanie meyer) for instance.
2Jo Salvatorethis is just constructive critisism...it's a very good start just be careful of past/present because sometimes you switched back and forth between them. Some users were also commenting that it was too short...well some chapters can be short, ive read books where there may be one chapter like tht. Like in New Moon (by:stephanie meyer) for instance.
1/30/2011 c1 103Harmony'sLoveHP
I'm sorry if this sounds mean, but the story has nothing to do with the story. Too short too. Are you going to update? It might make the story better. Good start.
103Harmony'sLoveHPI'm sorry if this sounds mean, but the story has nothing to do with the story. Too short too. Are you going to update? It might make the story better. Good start.