for A Reason to Live9/17/2010 c11 
22Serinidia
That was funny with the last line about the handcuffs =)
Cute and well written!
22SerinidiaThat was funny with the last line about the handcuffs =)
Cute and well written!
9/11/2010 c11 7mam711
Decent finish. I liked that Peter was acting all righteous because he didn't want to find evidence against Neal, but had to look for it. I liked Elizabeth's insightfulness.
7mam711Decent finish. I liked that Peter was acting all righteous because he didn't want to find evidence against Neal, but had to look for it. I liked Elizabeth's insightfulness.
9/11/2010 c3 mam711
OK, I'm glad you're dealing with the drug/alcohol thing, but if he'd had enough to have any symptoms (and I think fuzzy-headedness would be more a symptom of too much alcohol rather than Tylenol-induced liver failure, but I'm not a medical professional), then he should probably be being rushed to a hospital...
The way you wrote Neal talking to Peter was kind of funny, which I don't know if that was the right tone for this story, but I'm glad Peter found it funny, too, and knew it wasn't the right way to react.
OK, I'm glad you're dealing with the drug/alcohol thing, but if he'd had enough to have any symptoms (and I think fuzzy-headedness would be more a symptom of too much alcohol rather than Tylenol-induced liver failure, but I'm not a medical professional), then he should probably be being rushed to a hospital...
The way you wrote Neal talking to Peter was kind of funny, which I don't know if that was the right tone for this story, but I'm glad Peter found it funny, too, and knew it wasn't the right way to react.
9/11/2010 c1 mam711
Decent first chapter.
However, I felt I had to point out that if Neal is taking Extra-Strength Tylenol, then he's taking double the safe dosage, and drinking alcohol on top of that can be fatal. And if Neal's drinking 3 glasses of wine a day (which could be possible, given what we've seen), he should be avoiding Tylenol altogether.
OK, now back to the story. I'm looking forward to reading more.
Decent first chapter.
However, I felt I had to point out that if Neal is taking Extra-Strength Tylenol, then he's taking double the safe dosage, and drinking alcohol on top of that can be fatal. And if Neal's drinking 3 glasses of wine a day (which could be possible, given what we've seen), he should be avoiding Tylenol altogether.
OK, now back to the story. I'm looking forward to reading more.
9/9/2010 c11 1RocklynnJasmine
Amazing and awesome chapter! I can't wait to read more of your amazing and awesome story! Have a great and wonderful day!
1RocklynnJasmineAmazing and awesome chapter! I can't wait to read more of your amazing and awesome story! Have a great and wonderful day!
9/9/2010 c11 12kenziecaffrey
Haha, I liked the last line. Good story. June is so badass, it is so awesome.
12kenziecaffreyHaha, I liked the last line. Good story. June is so badass, it is so awesome.
9/9/2010 c11 ghostdolly
QUOTE: Neal was talking to his fedora?
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! utter fan squeeling! That was just adorable. I almost cried!
And I just adore June. She's so kick-ass in her motherly way. I just love her!
QUOTE: "I saw you talking to your hat. I was concerned for your mental well-being."
LOL! Lovely. Thank you beloved writer for ending your enjoyable story this way. The writers of fanfics are the awesomeness! I mean, they got lives and responsabilities and still they find the way to write these stories that no one is paying a dime for! I feel truly blessed to find story alerts in my email and coming to FF and find another wonderful story that I haven't read before. Thank you so much! Hope to read more and more stories from you, govgal, whenever you get some free time and inspiration!
QUOTE: Neal was talking to his fedora?
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! utter fan squeeling! That was just adorable. I almost cried!
And I just adore June. She's so kick-ass in her motherly way. I just love her!
QUOTE: "I saw you talking to your hat. I was concerned for your mental well-being."
LOL! Lovely. Thank you beloved writer for ending your enjoyable story this way. The writers of fanfics are the awesomeness! I mean, they got lives and responsabilities and still they find the way to write these stories that no one is paying a dime for! I feel truly blessed to find story alerts in my email and coming to FF and find another wonderful story that I haven't read before. Thank you so much! Hope to read more and more stories from you, govgal, whenever you get some free time and inspiration!
9/9/2010 c11 17MaraudingSnitch1314
Thank you for writing another chapter! I loved Neal's snarky bitterness at the bar, but the ending between all three of them is adorable, especially Peter's "'Don't worry Neal, we'll stay in the kitchen. I'm sure it won't take you too long.'"
Great work on this story! Please write more for White Collar. :D
17MaraudingSnitch1314Thank you for writing another chapter! I loved Neal's snarky bitterness at the bar, but the ending between all three of them is adorable, especially Peter's "'Don't worry Neal, we'll stay in the kitchen. I'm sure it won't take you too long.'"
Great work on this story! Please write more for White Collar. :D