for A Reason to Live9/8/2010 c10 
1RocklynnJasmine
Amazing and awesome story! I Can't wait to read more of your amazing and aweosme story! I just started college so I won't be able to read and review stories as much as I used to, sorry. Have a great and wonderful day!
1RocklynnJasmineAmazing and awesome story! I Can't wait to read more of your amazing and aweosme story! I just started college so I won't be able to read and review stories as much as I used to, sorry. Have a great and wonderful day!
9/7/2010 c2 Gloworm41
Great job on this chapter. I hope they can get Peter to see that Neal needs his support .
Great job on this chapter. I hope they can get Peter to see that Neal needs his support .
9/7/2010 c10 ghostdolly
What do you mean thsi is how it all comes together? You can't ended it like this! You can't! ;_; I got more questions than ever before!
;_; Will there be a sequel? Pretty, please?
What do you mean thsi is how it all comes together? You can't ended it like this! You can't! ;_; I got more questions than ever before!
;_; Will there be a sequel? Pretty, please?
9/7/2010 c10 17MaraudingSnitch1314
Good job, Elle, always talking sense into Peter. :) I like this chapter as an ending, but I feel as though we need to see how Peter and Neal make up. It just doesn't feel right without a scene in which the two refuse to get mushy and talk about "feelings," but in which they reaffirm their partnership and friendship.
Overall, this was a highly enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing your fic!
17MaraudingSnitch1314Good job, Elle, always talking sense into Peter. :) I like this chapter as an ending, but I feel as though we need to see how Peter and Neal make up. It just doesn't feel right without a scene in which the two refuse to get mushy and talk about "feelings," but in which they reaffirm their partnership and friendship.
Overall, this was a highly enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing your fic!
9/7/2010 c9 MaraudingSnitch1314
Wow, I have to say, Neal really crossed the line in terms of aggravating Peter, but his confession to Elle was so sweet. My heart ached at the thought of Peter and Neal no longer being partners, and as I'm sure you don't want tomatoes thrown at you from your devoted readers, you'll reunite them soon, right? :D Great work, as always!
Wow, I have to say, Neal really crossed the line in terms of aggravating Peter, but his confession to Elle was so sweet. My heart ached at the thought of Peter and Neal no longer being partners, and as I'm sure you don't want tomatoes thrown at you from your devoted readers, you'll reunite them soon, right? :D Great work, as always!
9/7/2010 c8 MaraudingSnitch1314
Hahaha, your Jones is awesome (as is the idea of Diana giving Neal a butt-kicking). Poor Peter. I hope he doesn't suffer any lasting physical ailments from Neal's constant gray hair-inducing tendencies. Looking forward to your next update!
Hahaha, your Jones is awesome (as is the idea of Diana giving Neal a butt-kicking). Poor Peter. I hope he doesn't suffer any lasting physical ailments from Neal's constant gray hair-inducing tendencies. Looking forward to your next update!
9/7/2010 c7 MaraudingSnitch1314
Hmmm, Peter's attitude in this chapter really perplexes me. I'm sure he wants to help Neal, but we know his FBI instincts must be taking over. He just seemed sort of insensitive at the end - but I guess he's just pissed off at the possibility of Neal landing himself in prison (again), lol. Good work!
Hmmm, Peter's attitude in this chapter really perplexes me. I'm sure he wants to help Neal, but we know his FBI instincts must be taking over. He just seemed sort of insensitive at the end - but I guess he's just pissed off at the possibility of Neal landing himself in prison (again), lol. Good work!
9/7/2010 c6 MaraudingSnitch1314
Oh, Neal, the number of hearts you must have broken in your lifetime... I enjoyed this chapter. I sympathize with Peter's frustration and Neal's hurt. Good work!
Oh, Neal, the number of hearts you must have broken in your lifetime... I enjoyed this chapter. I sympathize with Peter's frustration and Neal's hurt. Good work!