9/14/2010 c1 47kab16
oh my goodness SO cute! i love how you wrote their relationship. amazing story!

9/10/2010 c1 se34201
wow. this was SO cute. great job! i'd love it if you wrote more of these cute little one shots!

9/10/2010 c1 eyeon
Very good-even if they didn't quite admit that if they changed anything they might not be there together-but I know that's how you meant it!

Is there more to the story? I'd like to read more of your writing.