
10/12/2010 c1 Sozic
wow you wrote all these chapters in a month I'm impress i wish a certain somebody would update frequently I just started reading but it look like it going to be a great story.
P.S.you aren't the only one to be inspired by sonic chao chronicles: first lap hint hint
wow you wrote all these chapters in a month I'm impress i wish a certain somebody would update frequently I just started reading but it look like it going to be a great story.
P.S.you aren't the only one to be inspired by sonic chao chronicles: first lap hint hint
10/9/2010 c16
1NintEnzo
Hiya, world! Me again. ( the reason why I'm reviewing this chapter instead of the newest one is because FF.net won't let you review the same chp twice) I thought of another battle cry for Shadow! It's:
Chaos soul: Terios!
It was Shadow's prototype name for SA2 and means "reflection of". (Terminator voice) I'll be back for reviews!

Hiya, world! Me again. ( the reason why I'm reviewing this chapter instead of the newest one is because FF.net won't let you review the same chp twice) I thought of another battle cry for Shadow! It's:
Chaos soul: Terios!
It was Shadow's prototype name for SA2 and means "reflection of". (Terminator voice) I'll be back for reviews!
10/8/2010 c6 bombrocks23
(lights, cameras,ACTION)
hey and welcmoe back to ThE rEvIeW wAvE! Ok i wonder what that monster thing was that was freaky but awesome, the way you right this captures the readers attention with all that description brings this story to life! I didnt find any mistakes so cant wait for more of this story(come check out my storeis!)(and cut, now for some refreshments=)
(lights, cameras,ACTION)
hey and welcmoe back to ThE rEvIeW wAvE! Ok i wonder what that monster thing was that was freaky but awesome, the way you right this captures the readers attention with all that description brings this story to life! I didnt find any mistakes so cant wait for more of this story(come check out my storeis!)(and cut, now for some refreshments=)
10/8/2010 c5 bomrocks23 to lazy to sign in
ok, before i even start the show i would like to say that was not me who wrote that message on im that was k, so now i can start. welcome to the Review Wave. I love ow you put the two together it is such a cool way how you made them a mobian, i did not find any mistakes i cant wait for the next chapter! and cut
ok, before i even start the show i would like to say that was not me who wrote that message on im that was k, so now i can start. welcome to the Review Wave. I love ow you put the two together it is such a cool way how you made them a mobian, i did not find any mistakes i cant wait for the next chapter! and cut
10/8/2010 c19 NintEnzo
Nice chapie! Love the action! =D as for the shadow thing... There's a few I can think of right now how about these:
Chaos soul: Rift!
Chaos soul: Spear!
Well that's all I can think of now, but if I think of more I'll review again. Keep writing!
Nice chapie! Love the action! =D as for the shadow thing... There's a few I can think of right now how about these:
Chaos soul: Rift!
Chaos soul: Spear!
Well that's all I can think of now, but if I think of more I'll review again. Keep writing!
10/8/2010 c19 galeforcewinds12
Ooooooh, exciting indeed. This was a good action packed chapter. As for what Gale says...I really don't know. I think it is fine actually. PLEASE update soon!
Ooooooh, exciting indeed. This was a good action packed chapter. As for what Gale says...I really don't know. I think it is fine actually. PLEASE update soon!
10/6/2010 c17 cloverblade103
You little sneaker.well played, snatching shadow and gale in one swift move well played
You little sneaker.well played, snatching shadow and gale in one swift move well played
10/4/2010 c4
1Snowstorm64
places people places, oh man im on, Hey guys im back for more of the review wave! I have a few words, likeOMG ITS CHAO, i like this story a lot so this is a special addition of the review wave, let me guess that blue chao is wait for it A SONIC CHAO!(it should of been a shadow chao lol) this chapter was overly chao cuteness!:D. THIS STORY FLAT OUT ROCKS so bring out the next episode(will be tommorrow,)(forgot how to spell that word above):P

places people places, oh man im on, Hey guys im back for more of the review wave! I have a few words, likeOMG ITS CHAO, i like this story a lot so this is a special addition of the review wave, let me guess that blue chao is wait for it A SONIC CHAO!(it should of been a shadow chao lol) this chapter was overly chao cuteness!:D. THIS STORY FLAT OUT ROCKS so bring out the next episode(will be tommorrow,)(forgot how to spell that word above):P
10/4/2010 c3 Snowstorm64
(in 3,2,1 action!)Hey guys and we're back with our latest additon of THE REVIEW WAVE! The first thing i would like to say is OMG, what will happen next, this story keeps you on your tip of your toes, i'm wondering what will happen to Chris, now time for some comments, how can you right like this its AMAZING, whats your secret, oh your not telling:(tear)any ways i see you got a review from KINGDOM RIDER92(is that right?) cant wait for more so bring in the ch. de4(and CUT):」
(in 3,2,1 action!)Hey guys and we're back with our latest additon of THE REVIEW WAVE! The first thing i would like to say is OMG, what will happen next, this story keeps you on your tip of your toes, i'm wondering what will happen to Chris, now time for some comments, how can you right like this its AMAZING, whats your secret, oh your not telling:(tear)any ways i see you got a review from KINGDOM RIDER92(is that right?) cant wait for more so bring in the ch. de4(and CUT):」
10/4/2010 c2 Snowstorm64
ARE YOU READY TO HAVE OVER 30 REVIEWS? Well heres how it works, i call this little show THE REVIEW WAVE AND I AM THE HOST, so i will review what i want to say, VIRTIE TRIPS ROCK=D:D, i will comment on them,1 of all why cant we have them its not fair:(
and i will update you on other fanfics, SO STAY TUNED FOR THE NEXT EPISODE OF THE REVIEW WAVE!(and cut):p
ARE YOU READY TO HAVE OVER 30 REVIEWS? Well heres how it works, i call this little show THE REVIEW WAVE AND I AM THE HOST, so i will review what i want to say, VIRTIE TRIPS ROCK=D:D, i will comment on them,1 of all why cant we have them its not fair:(
and i will update you on other fanfics, SO STAY TUNED FOR THE NEXT EPISODE OF THE REVIEW WAVE!(and cut):p
10/4/2010 c18
1NintEnzo
THAT WAS A GOOD CHAPTER! I liked the overall wittyness of this chapter! And don't worry, your doing fine. The fluff and stuff is good you know but just don't go overboard!
Because as everyone knows that,
Boy+Girl+Forest=
AIRSOFT GUN WARS! XD
Benesisimo! Bravo! And I can't wait for the action!

THAT WAS A GOOD CHAPTER! I liked the overall wittyness of this chapter! And don't worry, your doing fine. The fluff and stuff is good you know but just don't go overboard!
Because as everyone knows that,
Boy+Girl+Forest=
AIRSOFT GUN WARS! XD
Benesisimo! Bravo! And I can't wait for the action!
10/4/2010 c18 galeforcewinds12
Good chapter but I think you kinda cut Gale off too quickly. I wonder what the rumbling was? Can't wait for the next chapter as you know. And I can't wait to read you crossover!
Good chapter but I think you kinda cut Gale off too quickly. I wonder what the rumbling was? Can't wait for the next chapter as you know. And I can't wait to read you crossover!
10/3/2010 c17 NintEnzo
Gasp! Shadow must have put hi-pressure airsoft against her lips! XD well that's my guess. Good chapter although I think it's time to get back to some actual action.
Gasp! Shadow must have put hi-pressure airsoft against her lips! XD well that's my guess. Good chapter although I think it's time to get back to some actual action.
10/3/2010 c17 galeforcewinds12
eeee! i like it! you are making this story good! it was short...again but it was good! I can't wait to find out what happens to them!
eeee! i like it! you are making this story good! it was short...again but it was good! I can't wait to find out what happens to them!
10/3/2010 c16 galeforcewinds12
Ahh! Another cliffie? And please don't tell me you are making Gale the bad guy. This was a good chapter but a little short. I like the way you write the chaos. CAN'T wait for your next chapter and thanks for the shoutout!
Ahh! Another cliffie? And please don't tell me you are making Gale the bad guy. This was a good chapter but a little short. I like the way you write the chaos. CAN'T wait for your next chapter and thanks for the shoutout!