
10/2/2010 c15
7Kindom Rider92
This is definitely a cute chapter... I'm glad to see Swift so happy on a Sunday. The fact that he hates Saturdays was something I almost forgot... I guess in my story, Swift found his house was destroyed on a Saturday. Poor little guy.
Anyways, the shower troubles just made me laugh. Keep going with this... and good luck on your crossover.

This is definitely a cute chapter... I'm glad to see Swift so happy on a Sunday. The fact that he hates Saturdays was something I almost forgot... I guess in my story, Swift found his house was destroyed on a Saturday. Poor little guy.
Anyways, the shower troubles just made me laugh. Keep going with this... and good luck on your crossover.
10/1/2010 c15 galeforcewinds12
Ergh! Why do you do this to me? I liked this chapter...nice and slow. Congrats on the review and can't wait for the next chapter!
Ergh! Why do you do this to me? I liked this chapter...nice and slow. Congrats on the review and can't wait for the next chapter!
9/30/2010 c14 Kindom Rider92
Alright, first of all, thanks for writing this. I never thought Sonic Chao Chronicles would ever get popular enough to actually have fans writing their own stories with unique twists on things.
Speaking of which, you're doing a pretty good job, so far. The way I do things is a little different and will kind of make yours AU, but oh, what the hey? Live and let live. That being said, I'm a little shocked by Shadow, but by all means, in your story, he's Gale and Crimson, while in mine... you'll have to see.
You do have some errors with spelling, but I have to say I'm touched. (I also found Chris having a little cousin pick up his slack where he left off in this AU so cute... that being said, who are her parents? XD)
Anyways, great story, keep it up, and I'll try to do the same with my own crazy misadventures...
Alright, first of all, thanks for writing this. I never thought Sonic Chao Chronicles would ever get popular enough to actually have fans writing their own stories with unique twists on things.
Speaking of which, you're doing a pretty good job, so far. The way I do things is a little different and will kind of make yours AU, but oh, what the hey? Live and let live. That being said, I'm a little shocked by Shadow, but by all means, in your story, he's Gale and Crimson, while in mine... you'll have to see.
You do have some errors with spelling, but I have to say I'm touched. (I also found Chris having a little cousin pick up his slack where he left off in this AU so cute... that being said, who are her parents? XD)
Anyways, great story, keep it up, and I'll try to do the same with my own crazy misadventures...
9/27/2010 c14
1NintEnzo
I like it, and I think its coming along nicely. But i think there's a few problems...
SPOILER ALERT!
I think I know where you got the name Gale from...
*coughcoughhungergamescough* and wasn't Shadow created by Gerald Robotnik? Still I like it! =D

I like it, and I think its coming along nicely. But i think there's a few problems...
SPOILER ALERT!
I think I know where you got the name Gale from...
*coughcoughhungergamescough* and wasn't Shadow created by Gerald Robotnik? Still I like it! =D
9/27/2010 c14 galeforcewinds12
OoOoOoO I love it! I like this new mysterious person Gale too! Lol. He sounds familiar! :). I can't wait forte next chapter!
OoOoOoO I love it! I like this new mysterious person Gale too! Lol. He sounds familiar! :). I can't wait forte next chapter!
9/26/2010 c13 galeforcewinds12
Wow, that was really good. I think I know where you are going and can't wait for the next chapter!
Wow, that was really good. I think I know where you are going and can't wait for the next chapter!
9/21/2010 c12 galeforcewinds12
Yay I finished it! It us really good and I like the idea of the two characters thingy. Can't wait for more!
Yay I finished it! It us really good and I like the idea of the two characters thingy. Can't wait for more!
9/15/2010 c8 cloverblade103
i love it so far. only thing is you have to distinguih their morphed and seprate forms better.otherwise it is fantastic;)
i love it so far. only thing is you have to distinguih their morphed and seprate forms better.otherwise it is fantastic;)
9/11/2010 c2 galeforcewinds12
Another good chapter. I like how even though they are in the future, you can still relate somewhat to them.
Another good chapter. I like how even though they are in the future, you can still relate somewhat to them.
9/11/2010 c1 galeforcewinds12
I HATE THIS STORY! it is totally lame and stupid and the characters are totally unbelievable!
(this message is written in code. It really says:
I LOVE IT! i like the idea of the swatch thing and i love Lina's character. For a first chapter, it was good.)
I HATE THIS STORY! it is totally lame and stupid and the characters are totally unbelievable!
(this message is written in code. It really says:
I LOVE IT! i like the idea of the swatch thing and i love Lina's character. For a first chapter, it was good.)
9/11/2010 c1 NintEnzo
Wow thats awsome! Personally I've never read the original, but I love the idea! You deserve a chocolate cake! To bad I don't know how to bake...=D
Wow thats awsome! Personally I've never read the original, but I love the idea! You deserve a chocolate cake! To bad I don't know how to bake...=D
9/10/2010 c1 bombrocks23
GOOD GOODFACES:」:):}::íüüüüüüüüüü
GOOD GOODFACES:」:):}::íüüüüüüüüüü
9/10/2010 c1 misty-the-fox103
hey i love it! oxygen cookies for you
hey i love it! oxygen cookies for you