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2The Gallant Jiraiya-Sama
Seeing as how it has been 7yrs since you’ve updated this story; I must express my deep sadness. This is an incredible tale you’ve woven and to leave it incomplete I feel is criminal. I hope you eventually find the inspiration to continue and complete this story sometime in the near future
2The Gallant Jiraiya-SamaSeeing as how it has been 7yrs since you’ve updated this story; I must express my deep sadness. This is an incredible tale you’ve woven and to leave it incomplete I feel is criminal. I hope you eventually find the inspiration to continue and complete this story sometime in the near future
3/9 c2 Crywolf178
If you do ever decide to reboot this I would suggest considering having him introduced later in the story.
As it stands he is just far too strong for any one except late grandline (and even that is only if you severely nerf him). Heck even logia’s would only be a challenge as he wouldn’t expect it. Given we know there are people in the Naruto verse who can turn into elements it wouldn’t be that shocking that an immortal Naruto would have learned how to deal with them.
Basically this story seems like it’s mostly going to be a story about “Naruto” (in quotations here as honestly in these two chapters he doesn’t really seem anything like Naruto except for liking ramen) just casually watching the Strawhats adventures as anytime he would intervene it would end the fight instantly with very few exceptions.
Also the whole element nations in the one piece world is a tough sell. Honestly how nobody on either side discovered the other is a bit hard to accept. I’d say go with Naruto ends up in one piece it makes more sense. Heck even something generic like the old cliche of falling through a portal after sealing Kaguya as her last ditch revenge makes more sense.
I mean you just casually state that nobody but Naruto was willing to leave the elemental nations in the first chapter for some reason? That makes no sense as there would always be those who are bored and want to explore yet apparently no ne of the chakra users but Naruto want to?
If you do ever decide to reboot this I would suggest considering having him introduced later in the story.
As it stands he is just far too strong for any one except late grandline (and even that is only if you severely nerf him). Heck even logia’s would only be a challenge as he wouldn’t expect it. Given we know there are people in the Naruto verse who can turn into elements it wouldn’t be that shocking that an immortal Naruto would have learned how to deal with them.
Basically this story seems like it’s mostly going to be a story about “Naruto” (in quotations here as honestly in these two chapters he doesn’t really seem anything like Naruto except for liking ramen) just casually watching the Strawhats adventures as anytime he would intervene it would end the fight instantly with very few exceptions.
Also the whole element nations in the one piece world is a tough sell. Honestly how nobody on either side discovered the other is a bit hard to accept. I’d say go with Naruto ends up in one piece it makes more sense. Heck even something generic like the old cliche of falling through a portal after sealing Kaguya as her last ditch revenge makes more sense.
I mean you just casually state that nobody but Naruto was willing to leave the elemental nations in the first chapter for some reason? That makes no sense as there would always be those who are bored and want to explore yet apparently no ne of the chakra users but Naruto want to?
3/8 c1 Crywolf178
Honestly it would be cool if you rebooted this, I only just found this story and after like 7 years it’s safe to say you can’t really continue it as the fan base will have forgotten what happened.
Honestly it would be cool if you rebooted this, I only just found this story and after like 7 years it’s safe to say you can’t really continue it as the fan base will have forgotten what happened.
1/24 c1 A milion dream
Hi there i like ur story. May i translate IT into my acount? Of course with Ur name on IT
Hi there i like ur story. May i translate IT into my acount? Of course with Ur name on IT
1/1 c15 succubus.incubus
hey if you are still doing this story. have you ever thought about getting naruto an eisen dial. in the skypiea arc on of the four warriors that serves enel has an eisen dial attached to a sword hilt that generates eisen (iron cloudso its hard as iton and has all the properties of iron all he had to do was think about the shape he wanted and it would generate it he used it this way so he could have any kind of sword he wanted and when he wanted a different type he would use armament haki to snap off the blade and generate a new one in the new shape he wanted
hey if you are still doing this story. have you ever thought about getting naruto an eisen dial. in the skypiea arc on of the four warriors that serves enel has an eisen dial attached to a sword hilt that generates eisen (iron cloudso its hard as iton and has all the properties of iron all he had to do was think about the shape he wanted and it would generate it he used it this way so he could have any kind of sword he wanted and when he wanted a different type he would use armament haki to snap off the blade and generate a new one in the new shape he wanted
11/16/2024 c28 DragonGod926
I've enjoyed this but where is Kurama, he's obviously still sealed inside of Naruto. They haven't spoken to each other at all since this story began.
I've enjoyed this but where is Kurama, he's obviously still sealed inside of Naruto. They haven't spoken to each other at all since this story began.
10/8/2024 c53 Guest
Looking forward to seeing this continue it’s really good.
Looking forward to seeing this continue it’s really good.
10/2/2024 c53 ashishroy.akr08
had a blast reading this.. this story deserves its top rank of naruto x one piece.
hoping to see it completed in future
had a blast reading this.. this story deserves its top rank of naruto x one piece.
hoping to see it completed in future
8/20/2024 c7 dastewie2012
Yes part of her wants it, but reasonable things can blur the lines of why they don’t. For example, you could have a a conventionally attractive family that dictated your taste in women and your their reason for their tastes. This could result in some sweet home alabama with enough alcohol.
Yes part of her wants it, but reasonable things can blur the lines of why they don’t. For example, you could have a a conventionally attractive family that dictated your taste in women and your their reason for their tastes. This could result in some sweet home alabama with enough alcohol.
7/17/2024 c14 Otsutsuki no Yami
and lost all respect for this story. Naruto could easily defeat the Marine because madara can do that easily, and bullets, naruto is aster than lifht. his urability is higher and you give me this crap orry, but i am out f here after you hyped him up only to give bullshit reasons
and lost all respect for this story. Naruto could easily defeat the Marine because madara can do that easily, and bullets, naruto is aster than lifht. his urability is higher and you give me this crap orry, but i am out f here after you hyped him up only to give bullshit reasons
7/14/2024 c8 Fionn the Otaku
Much as I like this in general and especially Naruto being a bad $$? I dislike how badly cannon is being derailed and keeping some really awesome things from happening.
Much as I like this in general and especially Naruto being a bad $$? I dislike how badly cannon is being derailed and keeping some really awesome things from happening.
7/13/2024 c15 Haji the Monster
I have to say that this slapstick abuse of Naruto is getting old. It was really the only thing I hated about the original Naruto series and really about One Piece as well. It serves no purpose and detracts from what is an, otherwise, a genuinely good story. If you removed that, this would be a top 5 story on this site.
I have to say that this slapstick abuse of Naruto is getting old. It was really the only thing I hated about the original Naruto series and really about One Piece as well. It serves no purpose and detracts from what is an, otherwise, a genuinely good story. If you removed that, this would be a top 5 story on this site.