for Shinobi of the High Seas7/13/2024 c15 Haji the Monster
I have to say that this slapstick abuse of Naruto is getting old. It was really the only thing I hated about the original Naruto series and really about One Piece as well. It serves no purpose and detracts from what is an, otherwise, a genuinely good story. If you removed that, this would be a top 5 story on this site.
I have to say that this slapstick abuse of Naruto is getting old. It was really the only thing I hated about the original Naruto series and really about One Piece as well. It serves no purpose and detracts from what is an, otherwise, a genuinely good story. If you removed that, this would be a top 5 story on this site.
6/24/2024 c15 Keftedaki
Honestly the story up to this point at leat, is fine. Despite that there are two big problems with it.
First of all, there is no Kurama, he just doesn't show up.
Secondly Naruto is thousands of times weaker.
Lets forget his completely ineffective usage of jutsu at timea, his speed haa been completely nerfed. At KCM 1 naruto has dodged light speed attacks, nevermind KCM2 or SOSP mode. Hell, in wave arc naruto seems to be faster than this story, since he speedblitzes trained mercenaries.
Honestly the story up to this point at leat, is fine. Despite that there are two big problems with it.
First of all, there is no Kurama, he just doesn't show up.
Secondly Naruto is thousands of times weaker.
Lets forget his completely ineffective usage of jutsu at timea, his speed haa been completely nerfed. At KCM 1 naruto has dodged light speed attacks, nevermind KCM2 or SOSP mode. Hell, in wave arc naruto seems to be faster than this story, since he speedblitzes trained mercenaries.
6/11/2024 c32 Guest
This WAS good fic NOW ITS USELESS just die author
This WAS good fic NOW ITS USELESS just die author
6/8/2024 c16 Guest
Useless naruto useless idiot
Useless naruto useless idiot
5/6/2024 c53 Mesojoe
Knowing now what we do about devil fruit awakenings and looking at how you wrote Miss Valentine, I'm not surprised that you stalled out for these past 6ish years on this fic. I will say it has been fun and interesting, even if no longer entirely accurate (though in hindsight it now makes sense just why Valentine in the anime/manga fought as she did, she could only change her personal weight. Though now I wonder if her power being so minimal compared to other powers could potentially result in a less straining devil fruit awakening)
Knowing now what we do about devil fruit awakenings and looking at how you wrote Miss Valentine, I'm not surprised that you stalled out for these past 6ish years on this fic. I will say it has been fun and interesting, even if no longer entirely accurate (though in hindsight it now makes sense just why Valentine in the anime/manga fought as she did, she could only change her personal weight. Though now I wonder if her power being so minimal compared to other powers could potentially result in a less straining devil fruit awakening)
4/28/2024 c53 kronos105
te imaginas a yosaku enfrentándose a big mom en wano y jhony a katakury.
Can you imagine Yosaku facing Big Mom in Wano and Jhony in Katakury.
te imaginas a yosaku enfrentándose a big mom en wano y jhony a katakury.
Can you imagine Yosaku facing Big Mom in Wano and Jhony in Katakury.
4/18/2024 c28 
1101axel
God sage of anarchy is so fucking cool!
I have read 1000s of fanfics, out of all of them, that name is the best!
1101axelGod sage of anarchy is so fucking cool!
I have read 1000s of fanfics, out of all of them, that name is the best!
3/22/2024 c49 Guest
Aside from Narutos strength in this story this is all done amazingly well. I especially love the dialog, internal and between people.
So tired of stories where aside from the MC the others only exist to give slight replies or stupid lines before being made to eat shit. Otherwise action, action, action, because anything else is filler and a waste of time mentality.
Aside from Narutos strength in this story this is all done amazingly well. I especially love the dialog, internal and between people.
So tired of stories where aside from the MC the others only exist to give slight replies or stupid lines before being made to eat shit. Otherwise action, action, action, because anything else is filler and a waste of time mentality.
3/22/2024 c47 Guest
What would be great would be if he could recreate that massive twister from when he fought Sasuke at 16/17.
What would be great would be if he could recreate that massive twister from when he fought Sasuke at 16/17.
3/22/2024 c46 Guest
I think he forgets the fact they're on a ship and he's putting it at risk of damage against a crew with the name Fire Tank.
Don't think he recalls the wooden ship is somewhat fore resistant either when he decided this.
I think he forgets the fact they're on a ship and he's putting it at risk of damage against a crew with the name Fire Tank.
Don't think he recalls the wooden ship is somewhat fore resistant either when he decided this.