
6/14/2011 c1 Laser Slayer
Awesome first chapter. I especially liked the mission briefing part. Will try review the other chapters as soon as I can. :D
-Laser Slayer
Awesome first chapter. I especially liked the mission briefing part. Will try review the other chapters as soon as I can. :D
-Laser Slayer
5/22/2011 c9 Cherry-Blossom
this is really good except that you need to space it out because i can hardly read it :S xxxxx
Lots of Love,
Cherry-Blossom
this is really good except that you need to space it out because i can hardly read it :S xxxxx
Lots of Love,
Cherry-Blossom
4/9/2011 c7
8DreamsAreForDreaming
I like the way that you have put in a lot of detail and have really told the reader what is going on. Please update soon.
FBR xx
PS I have a new story up called In Trouble Again, please read and review it!

I like the way that you have put in a lot of detail and have really told the reader what is going on. Please update soon.
FBR xx
PS I have a new story up called In Trouble Again, please read and review it!
3/27/2011 c8 allreader
Hurray awesome chapter. Plz update more often you do it like once every 4/5 months. This is a really awesome story though you have to update more please
allreader
Hurray awesome chapter. Plz update more often you do it like once every 4/5 months. This is a really awesome story though you have to update more please
allreader
3/23/2011 c6 DreamsAreForDreaming
I thought that this chapter was good, as you really showed the emotions that Will felt by the words he spoke. I also liked the way that in the first chapter James is not his usual self, as he has just taken a bullet. I really liked the way that you have invented your own characters and I look forward to reading some more chapters.
Thanks for a great read,
FreakyBookReader xx
I thought that this chapter was good, as you really showed the emotions that Will felt by the words he spoke. I also liked the way that in the first chapter James is not his usual self, as he has just taken a bullet. I really liked the way that you have invented your own characters and I look forward to reading some more chapters.
Thanks for a great read,
FreakyBookReader xx
2/19/2011 c7
2LilMissCandy
Ohai, this story is awesome!
Keeeep Wriiiiting haha.
/me read this in one sitting. :)
Thanks for reviewing my story, btw. Sorry I haven't been able to read yours sooner, i'm kinda busy lol.
- charlie (lilmisscandy)

Ohai, this story is awesome!
Keeeep Wriiiiting haha.
/me read this in one sitting. :)
Thanks for reviewing my story, btw. Sorry I haven't been able to read yours sooner, i'm kinda busy lol.
- charlie (lilmisscandy)
2/4/2011 c1
8DreamsAreForDreaming
First I want to say thanks for reviewing my story. Secondly I want to say that I really liked that chapter especially the mission briefing. It is a good idea and please continue it.
FBR xx

First I want to say thanks for reviewing my story. Secondly I want to say that I really liked that chapter especially the mission briefing. It is a good idea and please continue it.
FBR xx
1/19/2011 c7 allreader
Great work! Now you have this keep updating and faster!
allreader
PS why was you're message called HELP
Great work! Now you have this keep updating and faster!
allreader
PS why was you're message called HELP
1/10/2011 c5 allreader
Who's kent? Well I know already read it was in my favorites and alerts I just hadn't reviewed.I so love cliffie. Know write the next chapter you haven't for a long time. Its on a cliffie!
allreader
that was for chapter 4 here isfor chapter 5
Nice chapter. Wonder why Tracey survived without the police getting him? WRITE MORE NOW! !
Who's kent? Well I know already read it was in my favorites and alerts I just hadn't reviewed.I so love cliffie. Know write the next chapter you haven't for a long time. Its on a cliffie!
allreader
that was for chapter 4 here isfor chapter 5
Nice chapter. Wonder why Tracey survived without the police getting him? WRITE MORE NOW! !
1/10/2011 c4 allreader
Who's kent? Well I know already read it was in my favorites and alerts I just hadn't reviewed.I so love cliffie. Know write the next chapter you haven't for a long time. Its on a cliffie!
allreader
Who's kent? Well I know already read it was in my favorites and alerts I just hadn't reviewed.I so love cliffie. Know write the next chapter you haven't for a long time. Its on a cliffie!
allreader
1/10/2011 c3 allreader
Poor Molly and Will and the whole herub campus at the moment. Really good writing a long chapters I like mine short but yours are totally good. Though between Molly and Will make *** its easier to tell
allreader
Poor Molly and Will and the whole herub campus at the moment. Really good writing a long chapters I like mine short but yours are totally good. Though between Molly and Will make *** its easier to tell
allreader
1/10/2011 c2 allreader
I feel sorry for Hannah. She's going through a lot of stress related feelings right now. keep writing
allreader
I feel sorry for Hannah. She's going through a lot of stress related feelings right now. keep writing
allreader