for John and Margaret: Mrs Watson's Party7/16/2021 c2 Stacye White
I really wish Hannah Thornton could just treat John as a man and not her boy. She is just uncomfortable with how deeply John loves Margaret. Desire is a natural part of that love and John is clearly more demonstrative than his mother. She is an intrusive busybody, IMO. I think John and Margaret are blessed to love each other so fiercely!
I really wish Hannah Thornton could just treat John as a man and not her boy. She is just uncomfortable with how deeply John loves Margaret. Desire is a natural part of that love and John is clearly more demonstrative than his mother. She is an intrusive busybody, IMO. I think John and Margaret are blessed to love each other so fiercely!
7/15/2021 c8 Stacye
You wrote that so beautifully! They have such a beautiful and tender love!
You wrote that so beautifully! They have such a beautiful and tender love!
8/22/2016 c4 Goose Mumps
Good stuff except it's "disoriented." (Sorry, I teach English for a living and it's a force of habit!)
Good stuff except it's "disoriented." (Sorry, I teach English for a living and it's a force of habit!)
8/5/2016 c5 
54fanci
Beautifully written! I think you have captured the agony of their minds perfectly; also the Victorian mindset and conflict within. Well done!
54fanciBeautifully written! I think you have captured the agony of their minds perfectly; also the Victorian mindset and conflict within. Well done!
10/12/2015 c8 4something2do
Great story! You have a lovely writing style, and I thought you kept them both in character nicely.
4something2doGreat story! You have a lovely writing style, and I thought you kept them both in character nicely.
5/14/2014 c8 Guest
That was quite an enjoyable read. :)
That was quite an enjoyable read. :)
3/17/2014 c8 LoveInTheBattleField
This story was great and I enjoyed it, Happy Belated Valentine's Day!
This story was great and I enjoyed it, Happy Belated Valentine's Day!
5/3/2013 c8 NCgirl2
Well done! Only thing amiss is that you failed to mention how John reopened the mills with the money provided by Margaret. The mills appear to be running smoothly as though they were never closed. Other than that excellent work.
Well done! Only thing amiss is that you failed to mention how John reopened the mills with the money provided by Margaret. The mills appear to be running smoothly as though they were never closed. Other than that excellent work.