
9/21/2010 c2 xStealthxSniperx
AMAZING. Plain and simple. That's the only wo- actually there are no words to describe how awesome this is. You did a really great job and I hope with all my heart that there's going to be a third chapter.
I'm gonna go clean up my nosebleed, but again great job! :3
AMAZING. Plain and simple. That's the only wo- actually there are no words to describe how awesome this is. You did a really great job and I hope with all my heart that there's going to be a third chapter.
I'm gonna go clean up my nosebleed, but again great job! :3
9/18/2010 c2 Anon
wow scrape me off the floor that was hot and i think I've officially melted! i hope there will be a chapter 3. I like your writing style, everything flows quite well. :D Overall great job mate!
wow scrape me off the floor that was hot and i think I've officially melted! i hope there will be a chapter 3. I like your writing style, everything flows quite well. :D Overall great job mate!
9/12/2010 c1 Fooly
It was good. Nice and simple.
It was good. Nice and simple.