
8/7/2023 c1 R
loved this fic as well as your other one! Big congrats on your book as well! Wish you the very best
loved this fic as well as your other one! Big congrats on your book as well! Wish you the very best
3/1/2021 c13
3Ferm
Owls eat rats. Oddly fitting
Love Snape's name being a play on your name.
The relationship was very fluffy. You avoided the barbed issues gracefully. Sometimes a fun fic is all you need. The angst that would've come with being reminded too much of marauders bullying would've just sidetracked everything.
I liked moony. You played on his strengths, and he wasnt infalliable. It's rather sad that Lily had such a minor role, but again, that would've led to angst. I already found her pink cheeks in potions infuriating. I suppose it is ic though. James had stopped bullying Severus and that seems to be the only thing really holding her back. It's so annoying that she'd be so willing to be attached to a guy who essentially tormented her best friend for years.
Poor Peter. I've always thought he's a broken mirror reflection of sev. it's hilarious that Voldemort's ultimate plan was to mark his great enemy's son. Wizards really are bloody stupid
The animagus form was really nice. Love that he saved the near misses. He can scout ahead easily. An owl kinda fit him. Nocturnal, observant, eating rats lol

Owls eat rats. Oddly fitting
Love Snape's name being a play on your name.
The relationship was very fluffy. You avoided the barbed issues gracefully. Sometimes a fun fic is all you need. The angst that would've come with being reminded too much of marauders bullying would've just sidetracked everything.
I liked moony. You played on his strengths, and he wasnt infalliable. It's rather sad that Lily had such a minor role, but again, that would've led to angst. I already found her pink cheeks in potions infuriating. I suppose it is ic though. James had stopped bullying Severus and that seems to be the only thing really holding her back. It's so annoying that she'd be so willing to be attached to a guy who essentially tormented her best friend for years.
Poor Peter. I've always thought he's a broken mirror reflection of sev. it's hilarious that Voldemort's ultimate plan was to mark his great enemy's son. Wizards really are bloody stupid
The animagus form was really nice. Love that he saved the near misses. He can scout ahead easily. An owl kinda fit him. Nocturnal, observant, eating rats lol