for Crippled in the Games12/6/2012 c1 Guest
really good, but could have more discription.
really good, but could have more discription.
6/16/2012 c4 
23Hope's Voice
I loved this story! While I was reading the book about...a year ago, I always wondered about the crippled boy in 10. I'm a little sad that he had to die. This is really good!
23Hope's VoiceI loved this story! While I was reading the book about...a year ago, I always wondered about the crippled boy in 10. I'm a little sad that he had to die. This is really good!
4/7/2012 c4 18tomatoberrykid
I really like it! Try to write more chapters. I can't wait to see what you come up with! :)
I have a big problem with adding details in my stories, but you did a fantastic job!
18tomatoberrykidI really like it! Try to write more chapters. I can't wait to see what you come up with! :)
I have a big problem with adding details in my stories, but you did a fantastic job!
9/18/2011 c4 Eric the squibble
Interesting. Although it seems quite a bit like the actual book. You might want to drag it out a bit more; unless I'm wrong, this guy goes down pretty early. But overall, good job!
Interesting. Although it seems quite a bit like the actual book. You might want to drag it out a bit more; unless I'm wrong, this guy goes down pretty early. But overall, good job!
12/11/2010 c4 abc123do-re-mi
This is a REALLY good story you have here! You should know it's great when readers (especially this one) can't wait to find out what happens next! Keep it up!
This is a REALLY good story you have here! You should know it's great when readers (especially this one) can't wait to find out what happens next! Keep it up!
10/15/2010 c3 Gangster 1
WOOOOOHOOOOOO! That was really awesome! I like how you incorperated Katniss Everdeen. I also like how you have a little back story for everyone, when you have more info on a person it makes you more or less sad if they die or come close to dieing. Too bad Katniss and Peeta are gonna kill everyone... or maybe not!
Good job :D
Gangstah I
WOOOOOHOOOOOO! That was really awesome! I like how you incorperated Katniss Everdeen. I also like how you have a little back story for everyone, when you have more info on a person it makes you more or less sad if they die or come close to dieing. Too bad Katniss and Peeta are gonna kill everyone... or maybe not!
Good job :D
Gangstah I
9/18/2010 c1 3Vylette Skye
WOW! good but for some reason i dont remember the crippled boy who killed him?
3Vylette SkyeWOW! good but for some reason i dont remember the crippled boy who killed him?
9/17/2010 c1 1almostgone71
Frickin AMAZING! The story of this boy needs to be told, and I'm glad you're the one to do it. Great descriptions and details, and Timothy seems like a great person who loves his friends and family very much. Can't wait for the next chapter, hope you update soon!
1almostgone71Frickin AMAZING! The story of this boy needs to be told, and I'm glad you're the one to do it. Great descriptions and details, and Timothy seems like a great person who loves his friends and family very much. Can't wait for the next chapter, hope you update soon!