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9/14/2010 c1 3LotusMeSenpai
Nice :) I only see one problem:

"The Centurions waited nervously as they waited." A bit redundant, don't ya think? :P
9/14/2010 c1 ShadowCub
I think he's more tortured by his inability to

accept his daughter's death, thereby getting billions

of people killed.

Make a robot that looks like your daughter, and pretend

that she's still alive, that bastard should have got a bullet

for that alone.

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