for The Hybrid experiment1/29/2016 c3 Guest
This is good and got call of duty writers who play viedogames are awesome
This is good and got call of duty writers who play viedogames are awesome
8/27/2014 c9 
3NYSTLSportsFan
Wow, seeing this story brings back memories for me. This was actually one of the first stories I read on this site, back before I had an account, and it was certainly one of the first really good ones I read. It's such a shame that it hasn't been updated in so long; there was so much potential for the story. If you see this, I really do hope you continue it.
Sincerely,
NYSTLSportsFan
3NYSTLSportsFanWow, seeing this story brings back memories for me. This was actually one of the first stories I read on this site, back before I had an account, and it was certainly one of the first really good ones I read. It's such a shame that it hasn't been updated in so long; there was so much potential for the story. If you see this, I really do hope you continue it.
Sincerely,
NYSTLSportsFan
9/17/2013 c5 Ryan
make it 28 reviews
make it 28 reviews
6/29/2013 c10 galladelucarioman
UPDATE! This is one of my favorite stories, as I love Gallades, Lucarios, and cars. Update!
UPDATE! This is one of my favorite stories, as I love Gallades, Lucarios, and cars. Update!
6/29/2013 c10 Guest
Dish ish sho awshum
Dish ish sho awshum
9/14/2012 c10 anonymous person
i was looking at xxcandies reveiw saying it would be fun to be a hybridit is fun im not gona say which one I am but yeh its fun especially when your about to be exposed what a rush it is also right now im learning to use phsycic and its fun i know that there used to be only 7 inculeds me but now theres 10 but i wont say who or what
i was looking at xxcandies reveiw saying it would be fun to be a hybridit is fun im not gona say which one I am but yeh its fun especially when your about to be exposed what a rush it is also right now im learning to use phsycic and its fun i know that there used to be only 7 inculeds me but now theres 10 but i wont say who or what
7/5/2012 c1 Guest
poop
poop
2/21/2011 c1 Guest
a mistake in the first sentence not good
a mistake in the first sentence not good
2/13/2011 c9 jachd28
short but okay
short but okay
1/7/2011 c1 10KitsPokePeople
Okay, just looking at your first chapter I can see somethings wrong.
When a new person is talking it is a new paragraph. Without that, the dialogue looks sloppy and squished together.
10KitsPokePeopleOkay, just looking at your first chapter I can see somethings wrong.
When a new person is talking it is a new paragraph. Without that, the dialogue looks sloppy and squished together.
12/10/2010 c10 scripps2000
Great story with some cool characters (though you could develop them a bit more). Being a hybrid sounds kinda cool! :p
Great story with some cool characters (though you could develop them a bit more). Being a hybrid sounds kinda cool! :p
10/20/2010 c6 z man
nice
nice