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1/29/2016 c3 Guest
This is good and got call of duty writers who play viedogames are awesome
8/27/2014 c9 3NYSTLSportsFan
Wow, seeing this story brings back memories for me. This was actually one of the first stories I read on this site, back before I had an account, and it was certainly one of the first really good ones I read. It's such a shame that it hasn't been updated in so long; there was so much potential for the story. If you see this, I really do hope you continue it.


9/17/2013 c5 Ryan
make it 28 reviews
8/18/2013 c10 NYSTLSportsFan
An update would be nice.
6/29/2013 c10 galladelucarioman
UPDATE! This is one of my favorite stories, as I love Gallades, Lucarios, and cars. Update!
6/29/2013 c10 Guest
Dish ish sho awshum
9/14/2012 c10 anonymous person
i was looking at xxcandies reveiw saying it would be fun to be a hybridit is fun im not gona say which one I am but yeh its fun especially when your about to be exposed what a rush it is also right now im learning to use phsycic and its fun i know that there used to be only 7 inculeds me but now theres 10 but i wont say who or what
7/5/2012 c1 Guest
2/21/2011 c1 Guest
a mistake in the first sentence not good
2/13/2011 c9 jachd28
short but okay
1/7/2011 c1 10KitsPokePeople
Okay, just looking at your first chapter I can see somethings wrong.

When a new person is talking it is a new paragraph. Without that, the dialogue looks sloppy and squished together.
12/10/2010 c10 scripps2000
Great story with some cool characters (though you could develop them a bit more). Being a hybrid sounds kinda cool! :p
10/25/2010 c8 1jachd28
10/25/2010 c7 jachd28
nice please start a new paragraph when a different person talks though
10/20/2010 c6 z man
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