for Demon King's Descendant1/26/2019 c9 Guest
Your "ki" and "beates them (insert character here) means very little if they seem to recover in 5 minutes or less.. I think you don't understand the nature of of fear... This is something that can BREAK people, like cause psychological damage easily.. and you got him flinging it off as nothing and people forgetting it seconds afterward.. This is something that scares people for LIFE.. permanently damages them... Not 5-10 minutes latter, it was a "whew, spooked me".. I mean total threat to their life. As in no more plans, no more nothing, they died a little bit that day... Your making it seem very stupid, and it is... to your stories... it's a LOT, lot, lot worse...
Your "ki" and "beates them (insert character here) means very little if they seem to recover in 5 minutes or less.. I think you don't understand the nature of of fear... This is something that can BREAK people, like cause psychological damage easily.. and you got him flinging it off as nothing and people forgetting it seconds afterward.. This is something that scares people for LIFE.. permanently damages them... Not 5-10 minutes latter, it was a "whew, spooked me".. I mean total threat to their life. As in no more plans, no more nothing, they died a little bit that day... Your making it seem very stupid, and it is... to your stories... it's a LOT, lot, lot worse...
1/26/2019 c8 Guest
Half a chapter wasted on people that don't matter?
Half a chapter wasted on people that don't matter?
1/26/2019 c8 Guest
giving tsunade or anyone else a reason to "beat the shit out of you anymore".. is just getting a little old don't you think? If he cannot heal it anymore, then it has more punch, but otherwise, it's just boring..
giving tsunade or anyone else a reason to "beat the shit out of you anymore".. is just getting a little old don't you think? If he cannot heal it anymore, then it has more punch, but otherwise, it's just boring..
1/25/2019 c8 Guest
I question kabuto's "intelligence" considering naruto already didn't trust the old perv, it's more "confirmation" then haunting isn't it? Just more reason to do as I said and already 'ashed' the moron. If you need "repeating" evidence that someone needs to die, your either as dumb as they are, or you wanna die yourself.
I question kabuto's "intelligence" considering naruto already didn't trust the old perv, it's more "confirmation" then haunting isn't it? Just more reason to do as I said and already 'ashed' the moron. If you need "repeating" evidence that someone needs to die, your either as dumb as they are, or you wanna die yourself.
1/25/2019 c8 Guest
All these people with their questions.. Why would you trust someone else?.. Why would you trust "a new guard"? "trust in me".. would be a better answer, owe no allegiance to any village.
All these people with their questions.. Why would you trust someone else?.. Why would you trust "a new guard"? "trust in me".. would be a better answer, owe no allegiance to any village.
1/25/2019 c8 Guest
I'd think after everything that's been said and done, and everything revealed, it would actually not be a chance to "join konoha", it would be chance to join Naruto... If konoha survives, it will not be what it was, if it doesn't? Then switch to another village. There should be no loyalty to a village that, the more he finds out the more they have injured him and that keep on injuring him regardless if it's a suicidal path... Just end it, and start again. That's my problem with a lot of these stories, there is no "redemption" because there is no "never do that sin again"... So there is no "saving" it.
I'd think after everything that's been said and done, and everything revealed, it would actually not be a chance to "join konoha", it would be chance to join Naruto... If konoha survives, it will not be what it was, if it doesn't? Then switch to another village. There should be no loyalty to a village that, the more he finds out the more they have injured him and that keep on injuring him regardless if it's a suicidal path... Just end it, and start again. That's my problem with a lot of these stories, there is no "redemption" because there is no "never do that sin again"... So there is no "saving" it.
1/25/2019 c8 Guest
I know your making him strong, like in fights, but I still see him as stupidly weak.. If kyuubi beat an entire village (konoha) without taking any damage and could kill them all.. and it takes barely a third of naruto's power to wipe her out? Then both of them are acting far too weak. These "people" should be a "joke"... as in no more then insects. All of them, from kage and sannin to kagurya... they all should be laughable.
I know your making him strong, like in fights, but I still see him as stupidly weak.. If kyuubi beat an entire village (konoha) without taking any damage and could kill them all.. and it takes barely a third of naruto's power to wipe her out? Then both of them are acting far too weak. These "people" should be a "joke"... as in no more then insects. All of them, from kage and sannin to kagurya... they all should be laughable.
1/25/2019 c8 Guest
You really got a "mad on" for sound huh? Your always having naruto take care of them first(kabuto, orochi, etc), like before anyone! Regardless of the fact that the garbage in konoha is right next to him and all his loved ones, so they can continuously strike at all of them! And any of the akutski are more powerful then any twit in sound! I don't see the constant appeal. Sound seems more like a squeaky hinge on a door, meanwhile you have a hole in your ceiling and your pipes keep backing up! (priorities).
You really got a "mad on" for sound huh? Your always having naruto take care of them first(kabuto, orochi, etc), like before anyone! Regardless of the fact that the garbage in konoha is right next to him and all his loved ones, so they can continuously strike at all of them! And any of the akutski are more powerful then any twit in sound! I don't see the constant appeal. Sound seems more like a squeaky hinge on a door, meanwhile you have a hole in your ceiling and your pipes keep backing up! (priorities).
1/23/2019 c3 Guest
Why would naruto let the hyuugas go? I mean isn't that keeping a "nest of vipers" right next to you? That seems counter productive. And wasn't tsunade brought back to "fix" the council? Seems to me she hasn't done a lot of anything. She doesn't need their support. she has the daimyo and naruto and kyuubi (both of the latter can end the village easily)
Why would naruto let the hyuugas go? I mean isn't that keeping a "nest of vipers" right next to you? That seems counter productive. And wasn't tsunade brought back to "fix" the council? Seems to me she hasn't done a lot of anything. She doesn't need their support. she has the daimyo and naruto and kyuubi (both of the latter can end the village easily)
1/22/2019 c2 Guest
You ALWAYS gather everyone in the stadium and then "pass judgement", wouldn't it make a LOT more sense to pass judgement on them when they did the deeds they are condemned for? You know, tell them by their own actions they have damned and doomed themselves? Instead of just sitting on a throne and acting like the people he hated.
You ALWAYS gather everyone in the stadium and then "pass judgement", wouldn't it make a LOT more sense to pass judgement on them when they did the deeds they are condemned for? You know, tell them by their own actions they have damned and doomed themselves? Instead of just sitting on a throne and acting like the people he hated.
1/22/2019 c2 Guest
So why NOT send the toad to his death? He obviously has a suicide wish, and it's already been stated he'll be devoured, so no afterlife.. So why not just get rid of him? I'm not following here. Why would you keep someone in your camp that wants to die? I mean isn't that contradictory to well everything? Send him on his way and be done with him...Your not gonna make him suffer more, he wants to die, as in there is nothing else to be done...Soo, just end it. I fail to see how this is such a moral choice. (but then again I fail to see how ending the councils is so difficult, they are slime, vermin, insects.. naruto should have about as much trouble killing them as he does crushing an ant or swatting a mosquito) There is no "big plans".. because lets face it, you do this long, absolutely ridicules drawn out phase, for him just going in and wiping the floor with everyone, With no training, no learning, so he COULD do that from the funny part is, even with the long thing, nothing changes, nobody repents, nobody rejects the leaf, absolutely nothing happens, so what's the point?
So why NOT send the toad to his death? He obviously has a suicide wish, and it's already been stated he'll be devoured, so no afterlife.. So why not just get rid of him? I'm not following here. Why would you keep someone in your camp that wants to die? I mean isn't that contradictory to well everything? Send him on his way and be done with him...Your not gonna make him suffer more, he wants to die, as in there is nothing else to be done...Soo, just end it. I fail to see how this is such a moral choice. (but then again I fail to see how ending the councils is so difficult, they are slime, vermin, insects.. naruto should have about as much trouble killing them as he does crushing an ant or swatting a mosquito) There is no "big plans".. because lets face it, you do this long, absolutely ridicules drawn out phase, for him just going in and wiping the floor with everyone, With no training, no learning, so he COULD do that from the funny part is, even with the long thing, nothing changes, nobody repents, nobody rejects the leaf, absolutely nothing happens, so what's the point?
1/22/2019 c2 Guest
And before you say "they don't have the tech", um bashing on a magnesium rock with a kunai makes an uchiha useless.. I'm pretty sure then can bang on rocks! (even civilians can do that) Their status doesn't equal their power, anyone, everyone can take them down pretty easily, ninja or not.. And lets not forget kumo the "land of lightning".. how easy to blind an uchiha for them? Every jutsu they have has that side effect.
And before you say "they don't have the tech", um bashing on a magnesium rock with a kunai makes an uchiha useless.. I'm pretty sure then can bang on rocks! (even civilians can do that) Their status doesn't equal their power, anyone, everyone can take them down pretty easily, ninja or not.. And lets not forget kumo the "land of lightning".. how easy to blind an uchiha for them? Every jutsu they have has that side effect.
1/22/2019 c2 Guest
Not to mention all you need to beat even madara, is a chakra flash, a jar of pepper spray, a bright light, a bit of ground glass, a frickin' road side flare! All these things basically render them useless.
Not to mention all you need to beat even madara, is a chakra flash, a jar of pepper spray, a bright light, a bit of ground glass, a frickin' road side flare! All these things basically render them useless.
1/22/2019 c2 Guest
Why would naruto have to be wary of amerutsu? He's a demon LORD his powers were honed in hell, that kinda flame should be nothing to him, a matchstick! Same thing if you gave him superman's powers or thor's.. That's really nothing of any consequence. All the uchiha's eyeball powers seem really, underpowered!
Why would naruto have to be wary of amerutsu? He's a demon LORD his powers were honed in hell, that kinda flame should be nothing to him, a matchstick! Same thing if you gave him superman's powers or thor's.. That's really nothing of any consequence. All the uchiha's eyeball powers seem really, underpowered!
1/22/2019 c2 Guest
Questioning his spy network? Yeah I'd be questioning it too, considering not only are they bouncing from place to place hunting tsunade, but he somehow missed that orochimaru had set up his own hidden village, missed the fact he murdered the kazekage and missed the fact that he had two armies and a jinchuriki mobilize and sneak into his home town undetected(still not sure how that works given that there is supposed to be an invisible barrier), that is a lot for a so called "spy network" to miss actually! Kinda pathetic really. Not sure the toad deserves the title "spymaster", maybe "gossip queen" would be more appropriate.
"do your job in the next life"?.. Um if the toad is getting devoured, there is no next life for him, just eternal pain and suffering, no being reborn. Apparently you don't recognize the significance of what you wrote.. There is nothing waiting on the toad, nothing at all, simply pain, suffering and oblivion. Although what did he expect on trying to cheat a "covenant"? That's so dumb demonologists don't even do it! It's considered really, really retarded! And to make a "pact" with a god and then go back on it?..loll, I'm not sure what to even call that level of stupidity. U've made some dumb konohas but this one take the cake. This scenario would piss off heaven, hell, the spirits and other dimensions, the fall out would be.. biblical.
Questioning his spy network? Yeah I'd be questioning it too, considering not only are they bouncing from place to place hunting tsunade, but he somehow missed that orochimaru had set up his own hidden village, missed the fact he murdered the kazekage and missed the fact that he had two armies and a jinchuriki mobilize and sneak into his home town undetected(still not sure how that works given that there is supposed to be an invisible barrier), that is a lot for a so called "spy network" to miss actually! Kinda pathetic really. Not sure the toad deserves the title "spymaster", maybe "gossip queen" would be more appropriate.
"do your job in the next life"?.. Um if the toad is getting devoured, there is no next life for him, just eternal pain and suffering, no being reborn. Apparently you don't recognize the significance of what you wrote.. There is nothing waiting on the toad, nothing at all, simply pain, suffering and oblivion. Although what did he expect on trying to cheat a "covenant"? That's so dumb demonologists don't even do it! It's considered really, really retarded! And to make a "pact" with a god and then go back on it?..loll, I'm not sure what to even call that level of stupidity. U've made some dumb konohas but this one take the cake. This scenario would piss off heaven, hell, the spirits and other dimensions, the fall out would be.. biblical.