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1/30/2018 c7 Guest
One SMALL problem with danzo's other MORON idea, Naruto EVEN in canon can drawl out and PERMANENTLY REMOVE kyuubi's chakra FROM anyone (he took it ALL back from sora PERMANENTLY), so once AGAIN, dumb idea, doomed to failure from the second it was born (maybe danzo should have ordered some "acme demon strips" or something?)
1/30/2018 c7 Guest
You know with the raikage NOW being beaten too, it's getting a little ridiciuless, I mean Naruto ALREADY killed the third hokage and the 1st Otokage and now has beaten the Raikage, I'd be thinking people would be getting SICK of fighting him, just for him to PROVE to them (and the entire village their in) that he's STRONGER! Given ALL their overwhelming egos, I would think they'd just be getting SICK of him "suggesting" a fight and just make him go "cold turkey", NO MORE FIGHTING.. Then sit back and watch him "self-destruct". After all he seems to like fighting, just a bit "too much", like a drug that he keeps needing a fix of, Hilariously, they want to beat him?.. Simple, DECLARE peace! He'll die of WITHDRAWL within a year.
1/30/2018 c6 Guest
See? The previous chapter kinda PROVED my point, Naruto had NO TROUBLE in KILLING doto, but against the leaf? (whom have abused him and broken a contract with the Shinigami?) He only "hurts" them. He's already got the "COLLAR" around his neck like a good little doggie.

Also it IS a complete "contradiction", NOBODY CARES if NOBODY IS LISTENING, it wasn't naruto's recommendation that got tsunade the hat, it's the fact that Danzo IS TOO OLD TO HAVE IT NOW! All doing his "plan" does is the EXACT OPPOSITE of his character. HE TOOK TOO LONG! He could try to "discredit" the namikaze and the hokage all he wants, NOBODY is paying attention to him, all it would do is sound like is the bitter ramblings of a senile, old fool! PROVING the point even more! PLUS committing TREASON! His entire plan sounds STUPID enough to be thought up by "Willy Coyote" in the old bugs bunny cartoons!

Finally he killed someone from the leaf, but only when given the "okay"... His threats are HOLLOW
1/30/2018 c5 Guest
PUT ON TRAIL? By WHOM? there are NO COURTS in this world! They did the world a favor and KILLED ALL THE LAWYERS long ago! (It seems to be the ONE thing they got right)."lets take that bitch down".. They DO know that she's the kyuubi right?.. FLATTENED ALL OF KONOHA, EVERY SINGLE SHINOBI doing their BEST jutsus and it didn't even SLOW HER DOWN? ALL OF THEM COMBINED wasn't enough to even halt her advance?... Makes me scratch my head. Your power levels on these people seem to be a little, CONFUSING, considering ALL of the village (every single shinobi, tried to fight kyuubi before, COMBINED) and FAILED, they needed a GOD to step in, that they broke contract with... Um they ALL should be collectively KISSING NARUTO'S ASS IN THE BROWN! Otherwise their ALL not ONLY gonna die, BUT THEY'RE ALL GOING TO HELL. (no second life, no heaven, just MISERY).. Instead of like most people, they don't wonder, they KNOW IT FOR A FACT! You'd think that would make them a BIT more hesitant in WANTING to anger him.
1/30/2018 c5 Guest
Well that's kinda the case in what roga said.. except about money, I always thought it was funny, that super-powered people would care about that at ALL... I mean use an earth jutsu and create GOLD... Heck bring up jewels.. Go kill a noble and take him for everything he's worth, even the gato thing, what if zabuzza didn't CARE about his contract, just beheaded the man and took ALL his wealth? Put a genjutsu on some rocks to turn them into diamonds.. See? Money is kind of pathetically EASY if you have super powers and a questionable morality. POWER? NOW there is something that can't be faked.. Not political power, TRUE POWER! The problem with that (unless like Naruto, YOUR THE HEAD POWER) is you always have to be careful NOT to step on the toes of people with GREATER POWER then you.. If your the HEAD POWER? Well that's a completely different story, then do whatever you want, whenever you want to WHOMEVER YOU WANT, because the world is REALLY AND TRULY yours.
1/30/2018 c5 Guest
"I'm putting those that wronged me in their place and most know not to piss me off"...etc..? Um no your not, and NO THEY DON'T! Well, they know, they just don't CARE if they piss you off! ROFL.. I don't see how he's done A SINGLE thing that helped himself in the LONG RUN.. Short term? Yeah, but all it's done is created MORE enemies(the hyuuga elders, hiashi), left the enemies he ALREADY had alive(the councils, the elders, Jiryia, sasuke, kakashi, Itachi, Kasami, the akutski, kabuto, the sound four), give them FURTHER incentive to get even and give himself more and more openings! They're NOT gonna stop until they ARE STOPPED! Either Permanently (dead) OR unable to continue (maimed, all funds taken away and disgraced).Like megadeth said: "peace sells, but who's buying?"

You want to make an interesting Naruto story, how about one where the ones against the boy, just VANISH.. Never to be seen again. Naruto is the one killing them of course.. Like the earlier mentioned people, but nobody SEES him do it, and there is NO evidence he does it and MOST OF ALL, no body of the victim or any trace, they are just in the last place seen, people follow the scent or chakra or whatever and then it's just GONE. Old cop saying: "no body? No crime". Even better, some time AFTER they vanish, their bank accounts suddenly are EMPTIED from somewhere far off... Hot springs, or wave, or sea country... ROFL.. it would drive Konoha absolutely BONKERS, Especially if those places were NOT POSSIBLE with the amount of time in-between their disappearance and the drain. With the gossip mill of konoha around, they'd be TERRIFIED.
1/30/2018 c4 Guest
Why does everyone get so SCARED? I mean don't they KNOW by now that Naruto AND tsunade ARE ALL TALK? They talk a big game, and they release some K.I. but really they NEVER DO anything! So why be frightened of them? So what if they clobber some people every once in a while, tsunade NOR Naruto never do it to the elders or to the councils, so they deep down KNOW their PLACE! Nor does Naruto hurt anyone really of any importance, besides what's a beating? They ALL do that to each other and worse in spars EVERYDAY! Naruto even left the elders alive AFTER seeing them try to enslave and RAPE his supposed "beloved", so if they can get away with their lives even after that? It is safe to assume Naruto is sufficiently "TAMED"! Heck kiba FURTHER proved it, by only getting ONE kick, and A LOT OF BLUSTER from Naruto.
1/30/2018 c4 Guest
You know, there IS such a thing as TOO many enemies, I don't understand why he doesn't just go around KILLING those that are against him, so what if it's illegal? What can they DO about it? All their political power and what is it good for? ABSOLUTELY NOTHING if someone like Naruto comes along. So Naruto is just going to sit around FOR YEARS and allow people to abuse him and ANYONE ELSE that he cares for? Just keep fighting them and HURTING them, until they recover and TRY AGAIN, until SOMEONE gets LUCKY and kills one of his loved ones? THAT'S JUST DUMB! It sounds repetitive and BORING!

Also where is these idiots' "SURVIVAL INSTINCT"? If the ENTIRE village PUT TOGETHER can't take down the kyuubi (and it's all ready been PROVEN that they can't) and kyuubi can't beat Naruto, then WHAT IS THE POINT of angering him? They could throw their ENTIRE village at him and it wouldn't hurt him! SURVIVAL ALONE dictates TO KEEP HIM HAPPY! (and if there is ONE thing the village knows how to do, it's survive, afterall ALL cowards know how to do that, better then anything).
1/30/2018 c2 Guest
"Are you doubting my spy network?".. Considering that, that SAME spy network had been LOOKING for orochimaru for 12 years without luck and in that time he CREATED AN ENTIRE SHINOBI VILLAGE! Became it's LEADER, snuck TWO armies into the leaf, KILLED the kazekage and infiltrated the leaf TWICE? You betcha that you should doubt his "spy network". It's not like orochi has been particularly "covert" with his actions! Add in he knows about the akutski, but not when their gonna move, against whom, who their members ARE, how many there are or where they're located. So yeah what kinda "spies", don't know: who, what, where, when, or how? But then again, they didn't notice a NEW VILLAGE APPEAR!
1/19/2018 c9 reaperofages
like this story hope that you may update it one day
1/6/2018 c2 robert krause
when Naruto and the fox gril had now live in the home of his mom and dad had let him live in and when then he took the mob moeny to buit a new meeting room with 30 time 5 offices in it and some new bulk rooms he put in too , when in the up floor room Naruto had keep a men cave office and bar too , when in the back part of his home Naruto had keep his mob moeny hading away form the fools of the vaillge e , when in time he and his wife had some new book shop put in and some others shop open up like a clothers shop and some time he put in a bar for him and the others of the bits to ueds , when in time he keep a other office in the floor on the top of it , when he doing bouny huther and some thout it was czry for him .
12/24/2017 c9 soulesssoldier
Great story!
12/20/2017 c9 snorlax285
Noooo! I need to know what happens to the civilian counsel and the akatsuki. Well it was a good read thanks
12/17/2017 c9 carol
hope you will complete this one soon love all of your story's
12/7/2017 c3 Guest
when Naruto had get the mob money then he ueds it to buy out some old inn in the west side part of the red light of the vaillge when Naruto had found it ,it was the former hidout home he live when he was 6 or 7 and it sill in it when Naruto had it handing away form the vaillge and he mack into a new night home for his a new men cave to ueds too , when in the red light Naruto buy out some old homes he found too , whne he and his wife had buit one into a bath house ,to help out he and hitle had them some offices in the bule and green parts of it ,when he was in the hose bar k putin the art of wwoamn and grils art on the wall and then it took off too .
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