for Demon King's Descendant12/3/2022 c4 StrongGuy159
Hey VFSNAKE, have you ever thought of doing a Reaction story with The Shinobi Alliance after The 4th Shinobi War like: The Shinobi Alliance watches The Narutoverse, The Shinobi Alliance reads Demon King's Descendant, or The Shinobi Alliance watches Death Battle with Madara Uchiha please.
Hey VFSNAKE, have you ever thought of doing a Reaction story with The Shinobi Alliance after The 4th Shinobi War like: The Shinobi Alliance watches The Narutoverse, The Shinobi Alliance reads Demon King's Descendant, or The Shinobi Alliance watches Death Battle with Madara Uchiha please.
11/7/2022 c2 
13Write Your Wrongs
Like the story, but you have the misconception that Sharingan alone can suppress a bijuu. It can’t, only the Kotoamatsukami can control a bijuu.
13Write Your WrongsLike the story, but you have the misconception that Sharingan alone can suppress a bijuu. It can’t, only the Kotoamatsukami can control a bijuu.
10/27/2022 c3 ArkhCthuul
Could do with much much more detailing, and less telling at top speed.
Also bashing asuma? Sorry, he's the only one of the male leaf jounim I would leave alone.
Look at what he's accomplished, and how he dies. Nough said.
And on top, we not so widely educated readers need more detail (see above) about natutos powers and looks pls!
Could do with much much more detailing, and less telling at top speed.
Also bashing asuma? Sorry, he's the only one of the male leaf jounim I would leave alone.
Look at what he's accomplished, and how he dies. Nough said.
And on top, we not so widely educated readers need more detail (see above) about natutos powers and looks pls!
10/26/2022 c2 Guest
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10/26/2022 c1 ArkhCthuul
A bit fast and loose on some accounts, especially if a reader isn't as fluent with the second mange used in the crossover, but hey, leaf bashing, and kinda well done.
Count me in.
A bit fast and loose on some accounts, especially if a reader isn't as fluent with the second mange used in the crossover, but hey, leaf bashing, and kinda well done.
Count me in.
9/14/2022 c10 KillerDonut
I enjoy reading this story and your other stories I have followed & favorite so I'm looking forward to hopefully seeing the unfinished stories I follow finished sooner rather then later. Though I know life can get in the way of finishing any of your stories along with other stuff that can make it hard to want to finish your unfished stories. Still take your time when it comes to finishing them since I rather wait for good chapters and a good ending then have the story rushed out. Keep up the good work and take care.
I enjoy reading this story and your other stories I have followed & favorite so I'm looking forward to hopefully seeing the unfinished stories I follow finished sooner rather then later. Though I know life can get in the way of finishing any of your stories along with other stuff that can make it hard to want to finish your unfished stories. Still take your time when it comes to finishing them since I rather wait for good chapters and a good ending then have the story rushed out. Keep up the good work and take care.
2/9/2022 c10 Guest
Espero con ansias el siguiente capítulo
Espero con ansias el siguiente capítulo
1/14/2022 c6 ROBERT
it is like hen sole if it why not let Naruto had a black vest like star wars Han had and white shit too, and as for him had the girl tenten , when the 2 living in the whrilpool lands now ,
it is like hen sole if it why not let Naruto had a black vest like star wars Han had and white shit too, and as for him had the girl tenten , when the 2 living in the whrilpool lands now ,