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3/31/2020 c10 WhateverPlus
I like this chapter, continue please.
3/30/2020 c10 tugsoo
it's been a while since i last read cringy fiction like this. it was kind of refreshing.
3/29/2020 c10 1hellfire45
Good chapter and I can’t wait to see what happens next and damn Itachi has a weird way of showing his loyalty
3/29/2020 c10 2MoongirlDimandeFan
This was great!
3/29/2020 c10 tsukasa30
Glad you still remember your fic especially your old fic
3/28/2020 c5 1hellfire45
Good chapter but why would Kyuubi kiss Hana kind of weird that it was just randomly there
3/27/2020 c10 Tsukoblue
This is a good story but there is too much character bashing
3/27/2020 c10 lou2003us
I really want to see what happens next. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work!
3/27/2020 c4 Tsukoblue
Please don’t pair any of the clan heads with Naruto

Hana is much better looking then Tsume is anyway

Shizune and Tsunami (from Wave country) would be cool
and Koyuki is just a few years older then Naruto
3/27/2020 c10 naruto
good chapter keep it up
3/27/2020 c9 naruto
great chapter keep it up
3/27/2020 c5 UnsanMusho
I hope Tenten can be with Naruto X3
3/26/2020 c10 15SilentSnowLeopardNinja
Well this chapter was odd. There was apparently a time skip. Tsunade has became a utter dumbass when before she was being a badass all cuz she arbitrarily decided to keep Sasuke alive DESPITE the lack of resistance after a year along with the Daimyo's acceptance/permission? And then Kakashi has to go and prove he's earned a traitor's death by allowing two publicly known traitors into the village to rescue a third traitor who freely declare wanting to kill/work against loyal Konoha Shinobi, Naruto in particular, and the current Hokage. Because I guess he just wants to win a "Dum-Dum" medal? Konan and Pein are taking a wait and see approach to someone they are coming to not trust after allowing someone they know they can't trust in their club with a growing suspicion on yet another member. Hmmm...looks like Kakashi has competition for that medal, lol. Naruto somehow "needs" a few extra weeks to get whoever he trusts to go on a mission up to snuff to fight the akatsuki when the 3 years we missed should've taken care of that. And Itachi himself may be dead already according to his letter. Yes. Odd things abound, this chapter. But I have my fingers crossed that Konoha puts an insultingly low bounty on Sasuke's head (he's only a "weak" genin after all) with (maybe) a decent bonus given should his carcass be handed over with eyes and testicles intact. I can only imagine how humorous that bounty's statement would be those who see it. XD
3/25/2020 c10 SapphireAsashi
At least they're beginning to come to a conclusion, I hate seeing good one's left unfinished and forgotten.
3/25/2020 c1 4DarkFayt
I haven't even finished the first chapter but I can say I love the premise of this fic. I do want to say it's feeling a little rushed and the exposition dump is way too much. the Grammer needs a beta as well. generally I think it needs a second read from you for a little clean up. back to reading now!
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