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9/15/2010 c1 10Benjamin236
I have to say that the story has a good start so far and I can't wait to read more.

Benjamin236
9/15/2010 c1 8Darkca
interesting story, but i curious. you do a lot of god-like naruto stories. have you ever done one where he actually is a god?
9/15/2010 c1 44lord Martiya
An interesting fanfic. But WHAT shinigami made the seal? Botan? Ayame? Hinageshi? Rena? Koenma himself? After all, they're all the shinigami with a name in Yu Yu Hakusho... If you don't know Ayame, Hinageshi and Rena, here they are: Ayame is Koenma's secretary, and apparently something more if the manga chapter where Botan hooked them together means anything; Hinageshi appeared in the second movie, and is Botan kohai; Rena, who appeared only in a scene in the anime and whose name is given only in a picture in the manga, is a shinigami incredibly powerful (the manga declared her being Death herself, and the anime showed her as some sort of supervisor to other shinigami) defined by her being a friend of Botan and her tendence to kill the boys she likes so she'll be able to stay with them forever.
9/15/2010 c1 1TeiKEY-SaMa
nice story demonic naruto and manipulative sandaime update soon
9/15/2010 c1 6saiyan prince1
i actually like this idea. keep it up. its seems to have a good start
9/15/2010 c1 Terror of Death Skieth
very good keep up the hard work
9/15/2010 c1 Gallantmon228
Hey man. THAT WAS AWESOME! I absolutely can't wait to see the next chapter of THIS story. I've read your work before, Uzumaki Naruto: SOLDIER of Konoha being a prime example. I just wanted to say that this looks absolutely awesome and that I can't wait to see what the next chapter looks like. I hope it comes out soon. If I had to take a guess at the pairing, it is Naruto/FemKyuubi. If my guess is right, and I think it is, then you have yourself one very happy fan. It is my favorite pairing. I do hope you update soon and have a good morning. I will be keeping my eye on this one, for sure.
9/15/2010 c1 23Chrisdz
well damn that was a good intro chapter, looking forward to more
9/15/2010 c1 9Dragon Man 180
Interesting, but how will this effect Konohamaru's relationship with Naruto? I'm eager to see that, and how Kyuubi gets along with Hinata.
9/15/2010 c1 Lykaos
Sweet. Though he seemed overpowered even though he was training for a short time. Will this be a harem? and will Yu Yu Hakusho characters be crossing over?

Bout the story: Fight scenes was okay. Still too early to bring down judgement anyway.

Goodluck and hope to see more.
9/15/2010 c1 15UMMX
I would like to say thank for do this story, I hope you keep it up and finish it.
9/15/2010 c1 2Cryptic Saiyan
heh this is pure awesomeness, looks we HAD a manipulative sarutobi, and an idiot jiraiya, his nuts are dust when tsunade comes to town
9/15/2010 c1 1Still Not Dead Yet
Fun times in the leaf!

My only small issues with this chapter is how little denial Naruto had when he found out the truth and considering it seems Naruto has been living in his mind for years training I wound think he would be past the boiling rage stage and onto cold resolution.

Anyway I look forward to your next update!
9/15/2010 c1 egamtaerg
this is AWESOME!
9/15/2010 c1 6Rikimaru Black
i really like the new story :D cant wait for more :D keep the great work :D
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