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1/27/2019 c7 Guest
A lot of naruto-verse's problems also are it's own creation... Nejgi, sasuke, and many of them, are so SHIELDED from the rest of the world, their problems become all incompising.. Negji hating his 3 year old cousin comes to mind, all of their "gripes" their "vendettas" with the world, are REALLY stupid.. sasuke doesn't even know half the story, and if he did he's not "tragic".. he's an idiot... The village itself needs to GROW UP!

Negji blames a 3 yr old? Do I need to say more?

sasuke.. blames his brother but he never activated the sharringan, so he KNEW his brother wouldn't kill him. So obviously itachi told him SOMETHING.

Kiba. You realize he never had a thing for hinata in canon and really couldn't... Even he knew that.. he's really dumb, not evil.

Naruto: the people disliking him is disproportionate... No civilians died (or very few), they got them all to the hokage mountain way before their deaths.. And ninja use sealing all the time in their work.. They know better.

I have a "cleaner" slate.. just nuke everyone in power, Kill EVERY SINGLE PERSON that has any say. it's clean, it's reliable for the next gen, and it's FAIR, it's totally without merit on either side, it's totally balanced.. the roll of the dice.
1/26/2019 c7 Guest
A lot of naruto-verse's problems also are it's own creation... Nejgi, sasuke, and many of them, are so SHIELDED from the rest of the world, their problems become all incompising.. Negji hating his 3 year old cousin comes to mind, all of their "gripes" their "vendettas" with the world, are REALLY stupid.. sasuke doesn't even know half the story, and if he did he's not "tragic".. he's an idiot... The village itself needs to GROW UP!

Negji blames a 3 yr old? Do I need to say more?

sasuke.. blames his brother but he never activated the sharringan, so he KNEW his brother wouldn't kill him. So obviously itachi told him SOMETHING.

Kiba. You realize he never had a thing for hinata in canon and really couldn't... Even he knew that.. he's really dumb, not evil.

Naruto: the people disliking him is disproportionate... No civilians died (or very few), they got them all to the hokage mountain way before their deaths.. And ninja use sealing all the time in their work.. They know better.
1/26/2019 c7 Guest
"they REALLY needed to do something about him"... So why didn't they? I fail to grasp the entire village's attitude toward SLOTH... Don't they realize all these decisions have put them in the situation their in and will make it worse? Do something, or something WILL be done to him.
1/26/2019 c7 Guest
And the raikage thing, is just dumb, usual, but dumb.. If naruto can shake the planet, crack mirrors and windows and such with his very PRESENCE.. The idiot should know he's OUTCLASSED before the fight. You don't fight that, you say "yes master, is there anything else?".

In yu-yu's story, he was already IN HELL, fighting kings of hell, they could (maybe) possibly defeat him.. Against humans? It's like tearing the wings off a fly and watching how long it will crawl, it's cruel, they have NO CHANCE! Here it's like Goku fighting A GOOMBA!
1/26/2019 c7 Guest
I always wondered about naruto just not claiming his mates.. You realize in the mid-evil ages girls were married off at 11 and 12 yrs of age and were "doing their duties" right?.. Heck even here, they are warriors that can be captured and raped, so... Hinata being too young? Is kinda thrown out the window... If your gonna send them into combat,, Then really all bets are OFF as to what's okay and what isn't.
1/26/2019 c7 Guest
You do know asuma didn't like his father right? It was said in canon they fought constantly (although what about was never said, and it provoked the jounin to leave the village for YEARS to become a swordsman and never even speak to the older man or return to the village) He only came back the year of naruto's graduation (coincidence huh?). Sounds to me like a clear case of "Pontius Pilate" with his father. But you've moved him into "loyal lap-dog" territory. If you watch NOBODY was "okay" with the orders.. which makes it all the more madding that they somehow went along with them, and it makes these stories where naruto is taking back what he should have had really odd that they would oppose him, they SHOULD all be on board with him.

The human psyche doesn't work in the "vilian" way, not unless a complete psychopath or sociopath, there are a few things that carry over.. One of them is a guilty conscience... An adulterer cannot (not will not) look his wife in the face after an affair for a while, even if she never knows).. A same applies, but here, they would fall lock-step behind naruto because it would be seen as a "clearing of the guilt". The entire village CANNOT be psychopaths or sociopaths or there would BE NO VILLAGE!
1/26/2019 c7 Guest
Also the argument for naruto breeding with a bunch of kumo ladies makes no sense, they already have B so...It's kinda a dumb thought, to use someone that DOESN'T want to be there, and will never be loyal, vs. using someone already thought of as a hero with the same thing! Of course the same thing can be said for konoha's plans for any of naruto's kids... They want to make two clans, 3 hokages, 3 jinchuriki and the last 20 years "vanish" somehow from them knowing about it? Are u starting to see how stupid that sounds? Even if possible (and that's a big if) the first mission outside the village would clue them in and they'd rain hell down on them! It's really a "no win" situation that they've all put themselves in. I'm not sure why they just didn't spoil the kid stupid like the uchiha and hope for the best. The uchiha has a lot of "ifs" with his bloodline, "if" he awakens it, "if" he can master it, "if" he develops it far enough, "if" can use the abilities, "if" his will is strong enough... Nobody bases a future on "ifs", it's not enough.. naruto has them all from the jump. He "awakens" his powers at birth, they have no idea how to "master" his powers but he can pretty much beat those needed in a fight. He's got the blood of 3 (4 counting tsunade) hokages in him! And will? Try putting up with a demon lord whispering in your ear 24/7 since birth... Yeah he's got will. There are no "ifs" here.. see? Dumb bet.
1/26/2019 c7 Guest
Karu is the most FEMINIST character in the naruto-verse along with samui being really far up there, neither one would go along with the raikage's hair-brained scheme and would probably kick him in the nuts for suggesting it, after refusing him! AND it is "hair-brained", ticking off a demon that can wipe out EVERY nation with a partner who could wipe out one or two villages just as easily..Is just stupid! Do you truly think they care if they are "allowed" to destroy something? Do you think human politics mean ANYTHING whatsoever to them? "might MAKES right" and right now, there is no mightier. If the village loves "power" so much (and they still seem too) then why hasn't everyone got in line to cow-toe to naruto? They've SEEN his power, felt it, he brought the nine-tails into submission (something that nobody could do, not even the fourth) If they love power, they should be practically WORSHIPING him. You make them very confusing in a lot of your stories, they don't seem to believe in really ANYTHING, and are extremely inconsistent in what they choose to do/want. Flipping back and forth like tv channels, when that's NOT how the human psyche works. (if it did, why would we need psychiatrists AND psychologists?) Naruto cannon has everyone changing FAST, I mean how else do u explain uzu being missing and naruto not knowing about them in a 10 year time gap? That doesn't fit! Also hinata and him barely knowing each other, to married with a kid IN ONE MOVIE! (the length of two episodes) But the thing is, they don't keep flip/flopping, if they obeyed one hokage, then they obey the next, if they are told something new to believe they DO believe it! and they don't keep flipping back to what they were told before. (if the third's plan to "keep naruto safe" turned to crap they'd throw it down and look at the new one) Just in canon, the third's plan didn't involve naruto speaking up and saying the plan failed and tsunade never offered a new way of thinking. (tsunade actually didn't do much of ANYTHING, much like jiriaya... Neither harmed nor helped naruto, they were just "red-shirts" with names)
1/26/2019 c9 Guest
I'm not too sure why the elders are still alive, I mean just in this ONE conversation with tsunade they committed or ADMITTED to committing treason 4-5 times!(isn't THAT in and of itself concrete proof? You don't get much better then a confession!) Just in this one talk! What does it actually take to get a death sentence? And considering the entire village is full of assassins, (they don't have to prepare a person to do the killing, or a room, or special equipment) then shouldn't they just be killed INSTANTLY and be done with it?

And somehow I doubt very highly, that she'll step on their throats (either metaphorically or otherwise).. She'll probably make some threats, blast some KI and in general what she ALWAYS does but it will really, ultimately be for nothing. You gotta STAMP OUT these fires! Crush them beyond all hope of repair! Heck canon doesn't even have either "council" except the two old bats! (danzo lost his position after the uchiha thing, he was never a member after)..And they die fairly early in the later part of shippuden. So here, tsunade should just disband the stupid civilian crap. It's not needed. That and you notice all they're ranting, got them TOTALLY OFF the subject of the uchiha. You went out on a wide angled left tangent there. I say 'put him down' like all mad dogs are. And for the love of heaven, make sure his diseased bloodline stops THERE! So all this doesn't happen again in three or four generations. (no more bodies for that stupid spirit)
1/26/2019 c9 Guest
So Jiraiya picks neither? That's not exactly a viable option, he's going to die SOMETIME, all things/people die eventually, and he's terrified of what awaits him? Isn't that kind of inevitable? People finding him? Again, isn't that kinda inevitable? The toads will throw him out and he'll be running again only this time with all of konoha and naruto also hunting him. There are no "winning" answers now! The akatsuki aren't going to take him in, considering konan and nageto both hate him. (of course naruto and tsunade don't know this) Running just delays what IS going to happen! I don't understand it, unless you are that opposed to killing off named characters! It's terrible for people like jiraiya and danzo, when the one place that would have them, throws them out, because they've made enemies out of the rest of the world! There is literally, "no where left" for them to go! One thing though, shouldn't jiraiya be one of the ones that the shinigami want on a pike for helping the old monkey screw up everything? So shouldn't naruto have ALREADY been given the "kill him" order?
1/26/2019 c9 Guest
It's been MONTHS since naruto brought back tsunade and she has done nothing against the cdivilains? Why would he trust her? Why not "step on throats" and "crush spines" quite literally?... It's time to get rid of ALL them. If she can't.. then one questions why she was even brought back.

I've never understood how one's one story can be so full of holes... aren't authors on here supposed to make stories that PLUG the holes?.. Not create worse one?
1/26/2019 c9 Guest
It's been MONTHS since naruto brought back tsunade and she has done nothing against the cdivilains? Why would he trust her? Why not "step on throats" and "crush spines" quite literally?... It's time to get rid of ALL them. If she can't.. then one questions why she was even brought back.
1/26/2019 c9 Guest
Except the fact that the toad's spy network, let in a spy from kumo that destabilized the hyuuga... two armies and the sanin and a jinchuriki.. that's how his spy network has worked? (that seems really kinda bad). Oh and also let in kabuto and mizuki *who could spy on all the clan kids*

Kabuto who is really outside all of there power levels.. seems to know absolute information that number one would be impossible to hide form a "spy network", but would also be impossible to hide from every other "spy network" in place in existence... by every OTHER village... Let's just call it what it is, they whole thing with jiriya EPIC fail... nobody buys it!
1/26/2019 c9 Guest
Except the fact that the toad's spy network, let in a spy from kumo that destabilized the hyuuga... two armies and the sanin and a jinchuriki.. that's how his spy network has worked? (that seems really kinda bad). Oh and also let in kabuto and mizuki *who could spy on all the clan kids*
1/26/2019 c9 Guest
Your "ki" and "beates them (insert character here) means very little if they seem to recover in 5 minutes or less.. I think you don't understand the nature of of fear... This is something that can BREAK people, like cause psychological damage easily.. and you got him flinging it off as nothing and people forgetting it seconds afterward.. This is something that scares people for LIFE.. permanently damages them... Not 5-10 minutes latter, it was a "whew, spooked me".. I mean total threat to their life. As in no more plans, no more nothing, they died a little bit that day... Your making it seem very stupid, and it is... to your stories... it's a LOT, lot, lot worse...
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