for ProjectEnzo: Cold Fusion7/6/2011 c6 bomrocks23
This chapter is just awesome! Great work on detail, as well as description!
Keep up these extremely well writen chapters!
This chapter is just awesome! Great work on detail, as well as description!
Keep up these extremely well writen chapters!
7/6/2011 c6 
1Mr. Nahte
hey dude great chapter really liked it. but there was one thing that in my opinion should have been different(kinda siding with Enzo here) i think that sonic and tails should have been a little more resilient and hateful to GUN. i mean they come to your home planet and just set up shop as the government, and then your totally okay with them bossing you around.(Zayin in the backround with hands sparking)"REVOLUTION!
Hey still good chapter man and keep going.
1Mr. Nahtehey dude great chapter really liked it. but there was one thing that in my opinion should have been different(kinda siding with Enzo here) i think that sonic and tails should have been a little more resilient and hateful to GUN. i mean they come to your home planet and just set up shop as the government, and then your totally okay with them bossing you around.(Zayin in the backround with hands sparking)"REVOLUTION!
Hey still good chapter man and keep going.
7/6/2011 c6 galeforcewinds12
Hey Enzo! Nice chapter you got here. And nice new title. I liked how this chapter was a little slower (you can't always have actions all the time) and gave the reader a lOok at what Enzo was thinking. Can't wait for the next update and see what happened!
Hey Enzo! Nice chapter you got here. And nice new title. I liked how this chapter was a little slower (you can't always have actions all the time) and gave the reader a lOok at what Enzo was thinking. Can't wait for the next update and see what happened!
7/6/2011 c6 4Jyn-the-Raccoon
that is one of the most epic things i have read in a while! i have to say it was worth the wait. i loved the explanation of GUN on Mobius, it made total sense and helped me understand what the background to your story entails. and i also like the title change, its perfect! all in all a stellar chapter, keep writing!
4Jyn-the-Raccoonthat is one of the most epic things i have read in a while! i have to say it was worth the wait. i loved the explanation of GUN on Mobius, it made total sense and helped me understand what the background to your story entails. and i also like the title change, its perfect! all in all a stellar chapter, keep writing!
2/21/2011 c5 1Mr. Nahte
That was an awsome part of stuff with the violence and the esplotions it was cool. nice so do more things.
1Mr. NahteThat was an awsome part of stuff with the violence and the esplotions it was cool. nice so do more things.
2/21/2011 c5 4Jyn-the-Raccoon
GREAT! write more often, would'ya? i can barely make it from one chapter to the next, DO YOU WANT ME TO DIE, DO YOU! keep writing, it keeps me alive! (metaphorically speaking) :)
4Jyn-the-RaccoonGREAT! write more often, would'ya? i can barely make it from one chapter to the next, DO YOU WANT ME TO DIE, DO YOU! keep writing, it keeps me alive! (metaphorically speaking) :)
2/16/2011 c5 galeforcewinds12
Woah... That was REALLY GOOD! you are turning out to be an amazing writer and your writing flows so nicely! This chappie was epic and I love the twist at the end! I CANNOT wait for the next chapter and don't sweat about not updating...I'm not the best at that either ;P well, have fun writing chapter six!
Woah... That was REALLY GOOD! you are turning out to be an amazing writer and your writing flows so nicely! This chappie was epic and I love the twist at the end! I CANNOT wait for the next chapter and don't sweat about not updating...I'm not the best at that either ;P well, have fun writing chapter six!
2/15/2011 c5 bomrocks23
one word, FINNALY! You finnaly updated and came in with an awesome chapter! The quote idea is genius! And you didnt say you were updating from the BAHAMAS, HAPPY TRIP!
one word, FINNALY! You finnaly updated and came in with an awesome chapter! The quote idea is genius! And you didnt say you were updating from the BAHAMAS, HAPPY TRIP!
1/22/2011 c4 Mr.Nahte
Wow shocking chapter! that was cool(Haha did you see what i did there.)Can't wait for the next chapter.
Wow shocking chapter! that was cool(Haha did you see what i did there.)Can't wait for the next chapter.
1/12/2011 c4 1NintEnzo
That was a good chapter and all but I thi- WAIT! Why am I reviewing my own story? ... 0.0
1NintEnzoThat was a good chapter and all but I thi- WAIT! Why am I reviewing my own story? ... 0.0
11/10/2010 c4 4Jyn-the-Raccoon
LOLOLOLOL! he hugged Shadow! can't wait to see how that turns out! anyway, as always, another epic chapter, and no, you should stick to first person because i like hearing Enzo's thoughts, they are interesting. keep updating, this story is awesome!
4Jyn-the-RaccoonLOLOLOLOL! he hugged Shadow! can't wait to see how that turns out! anyway, as always, another epic chapter, and no, you should stick to first person because i like hearing Enzo's thoughts, they are interesting. keep updating, this story is awesome!
10/31/2010 c4 galeforcewinds12
Wow that was really good Nintenzo! You definitely have a knack for writing. I can't wait to see the reaction of Shadow. I was sure shocked. I would have never guessed this. Can't wait for the next update as usual. Keep writing!
~*galeforcewinds12*~
Wow that was really good Nintenzo! You definitely have a knack for writing. I can't wait to see the reaction of Shadow. I was sure shocked. I would have never guessed this. Can't wait for the next update as usual. Keep writing!
~*galeforcewinds12*~
10/31/2010 c4 bomrocks23
wow just wow, the part where you said “i am your prototype just bomrocks and the way you write is bomrock, beastly epic
wow just wow, the part where you said “i am your prototype just bomrocks and the way you write is bomrock, beastly epic