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4/3/2011 c1 Crystal Clear
I thought it was really good, but you should make another chapter.Maybe when clare get her revenge or she makes Eli hot and bothered again and he gives her punishment.
3/3/2011 c1 5Kluvly
wooooow...
11/27/2010 c1 36RachRox12
This is very different. But it's still very good.
11/27/2010 c1 twistedXxXx
ooohhh i liked how you showed how even though clare was acting different, she still seemed innocent, keep em comin ! :D
11/12/2010 c1 2xowifeysforlifexo
RiiA; *licks lips* THT WAS YUMMY xD

LMFAOOOOO JAYKAYY !

tht was hot ...

Update soon ?
11/1/2010 c1 vampd
I freaking loved how Eli was all needy in that. You searously need to make another chapter.
11/1/2010 c1 3FanFicCrazy24
WOW. I'm like gasping! This was breathtaking, and steamy, but not too far like others may go.

It didn't help that the song I was listening to is called "Inside of You." Even if the song itself isn't dirty at all, hahaha
9/28/2010 c1 15clareandeliforever
HOLY CHEESE! punishment? woah, man, woah! ieven got goosebumps.
9/19/2010 c1 Dark-Mysterious12
Lol Love it!

I don't recall this inapropiate. its most likely 'Strong Love' Lol.
9/19/2010 c1 54CStardust
jKLHFJKJKFBJKSFBSF

I HAVE NO WORDS.

AMAZING.
9/19/2010 c1 3RetickLover
dude! i LOVE ur stories! they r awesome! first wit the gum, then the ice, and now this! i loved it!
9/18/2010 c1 1not-so-innocent011
:)
9/18/2010 c1 Francesca
Clare SHUD PUNISH ELI! please do it
9/18/2010 c1 Clara
hahahaha clare u slipped ur hands under his shirt owowowow
9/18/2010 c1 5TVIsMyDrug4
Love it! The teasing is awesome and I love their battle for dominance lol!
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