for Compromised9/23/2010 c4 
31TwilightPony21
Wow, very interesting! And very mysterious - Hetty makes everything so mysterious. Love that she keeps texting and calling everybody at just the right moments. Looking forward to seeing what happens next - so sorry I've been behind on my reading and reviewing!
31TwilightPony21Wow, very interesting! And very mysterious - Hetty makes everything so mysterious. Love that she keeps texting and calling everybody at just the right moments. Looking forward to seeing what happens next - so sorry I've been behind on my reading and reviewing!
9/23/2010 c4 4Castielle
Haha, go Sam for thinking it was Callen's fault :) Obviously he's completely innocent in all
of this...so far! We just need Kensi to arrive now and then we can find out what's happening!
Keep up the great work,
Aimi
4CastielleHaha, go Sam for thinking it was Callen's fault :) Obviously he's completely innocent in all
of this...so far! We just need Kensi to arrive now and then we can find out what's happening!
Keep up the great work,
Aimi
9/22/2010 c3 4coreymason
The suspense sucks! You can't keep me waiting, lol, I feel like Callen I just want to know what's going on. I like this chapter because it feels a bit frantic like I'm feeling what Callen is feeling. I'm not sure if that was intentional. But it works for me. Also, I am not sure where this is going but I hope we get more team. You write Hetty so well, I'd like to see what you do with Sam & Kenz. Good job though.
4coreymasonThe suspense sucks! You can't keep me waiting, lol, I feel like Callen I just want to know what's going on. I like this chapter because it feels a bit frantic like I'm feeling what Callen is feeling. I'm not sure if that was intentional. But it works for me. Also, I am not sure where this is going but I hope we get more team. You write Hetty so well, I'd like to see what you do with Sam & Kenz. Good job though.
9/22/2010 c3 SHAREBEAR
I love this! I can't wait to see the history behind this story and watch it be revealed as the story comes out. Now, I am going to wonder what this is about and why they all need protecting as well as the history and what it has to do with Hetty and such. I can't wait to read the next part. :)
I love this! I can't wait to see the history behind this story and watch it be revealed as the story comes out. Now, I am going to wonder what this is about and why they all need protecting as well as the history and what it has to do with Hetty and such. I can't wait to read the next part. :)
9/22/2010 c3 always.theheartbeat
Wow I'm with Callen there - I wanna know what's up. :D But I'll wait. Figure it out eventually.
Great job, by the way. I love when he was talkin' to Hetty over the phone...she totally knew practically everything that was said. I thought there was a bug in the car or somethin...
Great job, again!
Wow I'm with Callen there - I wanna know what's up. :D But I'll wait. Figure it out eventually.
Great job, by the way. I love when he was talkin' to Hetty over the phone...she totally knew practically everything that was said. I thought there was a bug in the car or somethin...
Great job, again!
9/22/2010 c3 bookworm002
Wow very exciting and you seem to be getting closer to addressing my (and Callen's) confusion over what is happening. Just curious whether this will turn into a romance between G and Annabel or if that will just be a background story if it happens at all? Can't wait for the next chapter!
P.S. I love Callen angst stories so feel free to include that in upcoming chapters :P But please don't kill him!
Wow very exciting and you seem to be getting closer to addressing my (and Callen's) confusion over what is happening. Just curious whether this will turn into a romance between G and Annabel or if that will just be a background story if it happens at all? Can't wait for the next chapter!
P.S. I love Callen angst stories so feel free to include that in upcoming chapters :P But please don't kill him!
9/22/2010 c3 4Castielle
Hmmm, things are getting interesting now, although Callen seems a little distracted by a certain agent... *grin*
Can't wait for the next chapter!
4CastielleHmmm, things are getting interesting now, although Callen seems a little distracted by a certain agent... *grin*
Can't wait for the next chapter!
9/21/2010 c2 4coreymason
I gotta tell you. Have no idea where this is going but I genuinely hope you write more soon. I've been feeling bummed, missing NCIS LA and having writer's block. This story got me going and I'm even working on my own story again. I'm seriously intrigued. WRITE MORE!
4coreymasonI gotta tell you. Have no idea where this is going but I genuinely hope you write more soon. I've been feeling bummed, missing NCIS LA and having writer's block. This story got me going and I'm even working on my own story again. I'm seriously intrigued. WRITE MORE!
9/21/2010 c2 always.theheartbeat
Y'know...I like how even though there's def. a plot here, you're not rushing it. I mean, yeah, their going on their mission, you could say, but it's not rushed. Their bickering - which is def. a perk to read anything - and they're laid back...awesome job. :D
No way - it starts tonight, don't it? That's exciting. :D Great job, by the way!
Y'know...I like how even though there's def. a plot here, you're not rushing it. I mean, yeah, their going on their mission, you could say, but it's not rushed. Their bickering - which is def. a perk to read anything - and they're laid back...awesome job. :D
No way - it starts tonight, don't it? That's exciting. :D Great job, by the way!
9/21/2010 c2 4Castielle
Yay for a new chapter :) You have the characters perfect - especially the whole Callen and Kensi's shoe scene, LOL! I can't wait to see where this is heading! Keep up the great work.
4CastielleYay for a new chapter :) You have the characters perfect - especially the whole Callen and Kensi's shoe scene, LOL! I can't wait to see where this is heading! Keep up the great work.
9/21/2010 c2 bookworm002
Definitely entertained so far, as well as very confused. But since Callen, Sam, and Kensi also seem a little lost I'm sure it will all become clear in due course :) Can't wait for the next chapter!
Definitely entertained so far, as well as very confused. But since Callen, Sam, and Kensi also seem a little lost I'm sure it will all become clear in due course :) Can't wait for the next chapter!
9/20/2010 c1 always.theheartbeat
Although I'm sad it's Callen/OC, this sounds sooo interesting. So I won't complain.
Ah I'm so interested. I wanna know what's up! It's driving me insane. Not really, but still. Great job so far!
Although I'm sad it's Callen/OC, this sounds sooo interesting. So I won't complain.
Ah I'm so interested. I wanna know what's up! It's driving me insane. Not really, but still. Great job so far!