for She's one to cherish5/11/2016 c1 Please update
Okay i know its been already six years but can you update i adore this couple please update for me
Okay i know its been already six years but can you update i adore this couple please update for me
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10/3/2012 c1 sunset.1love
omg! you should seriously keep going on this! it sounds so cute! you're very talented! :)
omg! you should seriously keep going on this! it sounds so cute! you're very talented! :)
4/16/2012 c1 Reaper7
That was interesting. Very interesting. I won't mind reading a bit more, if you please continue.
Good job so far!
That was interesting. Very interesting. I won't mind reading a bit more, if you please continue.
Good job so far!
1/13/2011 c1 
7kgirl50
That was great. just a,azing you should definatly continue this it's really interesting that would be amaizing if you could continue for me! even if not one reads it i will!
7kgirl50That was great. just a,azing you should definatly continue this it's really interesting that would be amaizing if you could continue for me! even if not one reads it i will!
12/4/2010 c1 2NobleBoss
I like this pairing even though it seems crack lol but its wierd because theres no way to not make Ulquiura OOC and fall in love. I think this story does have potential but like kill of some of the OC's...theres too many. lol update when and if u feel like it!
2NobleBossI like this pairing even though it seems crack lol but its wierd because theres no way to not make Ulquiura OOC and fall in love. I think this story does have potential but like kill of some of the OC's...theres too many. lol update when and if u feel like it!
9/28/2010 c1 12TheLadyIntegra
Okay, i am the first to review so I'll give a nice long one.
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so, i did enjoy this story, but probably not in the way you would have wanted me too. I loled cause you made Ulquiorra so awkward! haha! he really isn't like that at all, but i can appreciate something COMPLETELY different I guess...
Um, writing advice- make longer paragraphs you know, and give more descriptive writing about the actual areas the people are in. it'll make the story seem more real. also, dont use brackets. =D
writing ulquiorra advice- ulquiorra is most definitely NOT that socially awkward. if he was gonna speak to someone, he would be strong and willful. Also, if someone called him emo, he'd probably kill them with a cero, not quietly whisper to himself in denial! He is very confident, almost aloof and arrogant. And loly is just a cocky bitch.
But i like the idea of a pairing between these two, so try again and see if you can use some of my pointers, i think you can do well!
regards-
Megan Horn
=)
12TheLadyIntegraOkay, i am the first to review so I'll give a nice long one.
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so, i did enjoy this story, but probably not in the way you would have wanted me too. I loled cause you made Ulquiorra so awkward! haha! he really isn't like that at all, but i can appreciate something COMPLETELY different I guess...
Um, writing advice- make longer paragraphs you know, and give more descriptive writing about the actual areas the people are in. it'll make the story seem more real. also, dont use brackets. =D
writing ulquiorra advice- ulquiorra is most definitely NOT that socially awkward. if he was gonna speak to someone, he would be strong and willful. Also, if someone called him emo, he'd probably kill them with a cero, not quietly whisper to himself in denial! He is very confident, almost aloof and arrogant. And loly is just a cocky bitch.
But i like the idea of a pairing between these two, so try again and see if you can use some of my pointers, i think you can do well!
regards-
Megan Horn
=)