for Harry Potter and the Turning of the Sun1/2 c39 VoldiesBedroomSlippers
Great story. I hope you have time to finish it someday, but if not well, it was fun while it lasted. Thanks for all your efforts.
Great story. I hope you have time to finish it someday, but if not well, it was fun while it lasted. Thanks for all your efforts.
12/26/2020 c39 darthcactus2100
Some of the reviews here are quite pathetic. Don't like, don't read. We don't need your worthless opinions here. And this is a fine story.
Some of the reviews here are quite pathetic. Don't like, don't read. We don't need your worthless opinions here. And this is a fine story.
12/24/2020 c15 Guest
Why is this harry such an idiot?
Why is this harry such an idiot?
9/10/2020 c3 Eragon135790
great ff so far. i only wonder what name harry will use cause potter would be really strange.
great ff so far. i only wonder what name harry will use cause potter would be really strange.
37/7/2020 c17 Suckalongbottom
bruh fck frank, throw that piece of sht outta here i better not see his arse in future chapters.
this fic is several years old and this fking chapter more specifically harry losing to frank is bullshit.
i mean you let frank dodge 3 consecutive spells shot from harry while the platforms is frozen and he had to thaw it out and then move out of the way, harry would have immediately noticed the penetrated hole in his serpent and have enough time to put up a shield or dodge the stunner in coming, not standing still doing nothing fck lowering his gaurd who lowers his guard in front of an enemy? not fcking harry whos been through soo many near death experiences and actual battles.
and then after frank won you just showered harry with the pity, "But let's hear it for both of our competitors ;they did a job well done" ah fck that , let go to the kitchens to celebrate harry's efforts suck a fckin dck.
bruh fck frank, throw that piece of sht outta here i better not see his arse in future chapters.
this fic is several years old and this fking chapter more specifically harry losing to frank is bullshit.
i mean you let frank dodge 3 consecutive spells shot from harry while the platforms is frozen and he had to thaw it out and then move out of the way, harry would have immediately noticed the penetrated hole in his serpent and have enough time to put up a shield or dodge the stunner in coming, not standing still doing nothing fck lowering his gaurd who lowers his guard in front of an enemy? not fcking harry whos been through soo many near death experiences and actual battles.
and then after frank won you just showered harry with the pity, "But let's hear it for both of our competitors ;they did a job well done" ah fck that , let go to the kitchens to celebrate harry's efforts suck a fckin dck.
6/15/2020 c3 CarolWim
Authors create several types of Harry's. Good, bad, powerful, stupid, ignorant.
this is an ignorant Harry. It's really irritating. Can't read more of this nonsense.
Authors create several types of Harry's. Good, bad, powerful, stupid, ignorant.
this is an ignorant Harry. It's really irritating. Can't read more of this nonsense.
5/2/2020 c5 AmWRAZ
One moment he is being bias little shit the next moment he is a love sick little puppy. Stupid author
One moment he is being bias little shit the next moment he is a love sick little puppy. Stupid author
5/2/2020 c3 AmWRAZ
Wow harry lost all his wild card in a day. Bravo author, no need to put him in the past if he has no advantage with other people sprouting about he time travel.
Wow harry lost all his wild card in a day. Bravo author, no need to put him in the past if he has no advantage with other people sprouting about he time travel.
5/2/2020 c3 AmWRAZ
This Harry is kinda pathetic, i mean he can save a lot of people and it not like he is going to die before seeing his future friend. It is not like he is going to die that soon lol. He can save Sirius, his parents and all his friend instead off being a little pussy
This Harry is kinda pathetic, i mean he can save a lot of people and it not like he is going to die before seeing his future friend. It is not like he is going to die that soon lol. He can save Sirius, his parents and all his friend instead off being a little pussy
4/28/2020 c30 Guest
Fuck you Phineas Bladder
Fuck you Phineas Bladder