
7/17/2014 c1 MasterShadowAssassin
This is a great start for what could be a great story that I hope you update soon it has been 4 years-MSA
This is a great start for what could be a great story that I hope you update soon it has been 4 years-MSA
6/25/2014 c1 powermachine79
Wow sounds like a great start to a super fanfic really hope you will write more :)
Wow sounds like a great start to a super fanfic really hope you will write more :)
4/18/2014 c1
73VizeerLord
let us see where you take this.
more please.
you need a beta, wish I could offer my services, but I am without proper net services myself.
blessed be

let us see where you take this.
more please.
you need a beta, wish I could offer my services, but I am without proper net services myself.
blessed be
9/3/2013 c1 Mathax
Are you going to be coming back to this story? This looks interesting and could go many ways. I would be happy to give you input into sifi stories if you wanted feedback on ideas.
Are you going to be coming back to this story? This looks interesting and could go many ways. I would be happy to give you input into sifi stories if you wanted feedback on ideas.
8/7/2013 c1 ahrondudegmail.com
great story are you updating it
great story are you updating it
4/10/2013 c1
6NightWithMoon
longest and smuttiest... apt description... though I admit this is a rather tiny story...

longest and smuttiest... apt description... though I admit this is a rather tiny story...
3/27/2013 c1 Chris
Dude I think you should continue this. This looks like it could be awesome. I've read stargatesg1fan1 story. It would be cool to see something different.
Dude I think you should continue this. This looks like it could be awesome. I've read stargatesg1fan1 story. It would be cool to see something different.
1/19/2013 c1 Erik
Yet another well written and intriguing storyline.
Yet another well written and intriguing storyline.