5/9/2020 c6 Guest
Please update !
Please update !
5/9/2020 c5 Guest
Omg wtf this is so good especially the last part of it I wish’s I could write like that “sobs”
How are u song good
Omg wtf this is so good especially the last part of it I wish’s I could write like that “sobs”
How are u song good
10/12/2017 c1 Guest
Why you don't update this story? It's so cool
Why you don't update this story? It's so cool
8/9/2017 c6 Guest
Amazing
Amazing
6/22/2015 c6 Forgot to login
I am so tired right now so apologies if this is short and doesn't make sense but I will try my best. I just binge read your story and your writing style is awesome and I love it to bits and I groaned out loud at the gun shots in the hallway, awesome plot dilemma, but he really can't catch a break can he. Then I checked the update date and nooooooo. It's been so long. I'm sure you have a very busy life and you probably have no time but I hope you're okay and managing well and I just wanted to let you know that there's someone here who just discovered and now loves your amazing talent of writing. I hope that if you still enjoy it you are still doing it and if you have some free time at any point, his story is holding me captive. But no pressure, I'd hate to be one of those update now horrible people. Sorry, but thanks for writing this much, it's awesome.
I am so tired right now so apologies if this is short and doesn't make sense but I will try my best. I just binge read your story and your writing style is awesome and I love it to bits and I groaned out loud at the gun shots in the hallway, awesome plot dilemma, but he really can't catch a break can he. Then I checked the update date and nooooooo. It's been so long. I'm sure you have a very busy life and you probably have no time but I hope you're okay and managing well and I just wanted to let you know that there's someone here who just discovered and now loves your amazing talent of writing. I hope that if you still enjoy it you are still doing it and if you have some free time at any point, his story is holding me captive. But no pressure, I'd hate to be one of those update now horrible people. Sorry, but thanks for writing this much, it's awesome.
10/17/2013 c6 1BatFink
Gunshots? Nooooo
Hide Alex hiiiiide!
Under the bed or something, don't confront it!
Gunshots? Nooooo
Hide Alex hiiiiide!
Under the bed or something, don't confront it!
3/22/2013 c6 Guest
hurry up and write. I LOVE THIS STORY! xxx
hurry up and write. I LOVE THIS STORY! xxx
8/5/2011 c6 6Blown
I can't think of much to say, really. Not much action, just a filler and setting the table for the next chapter. You know, this will just get us to put more hopes on the next chapter.
But, YAY! You've updated! The writing is spotless grammar wise, at least as far as I can see over one reading. I really like how you have a terrorist organisation attack Brooklands when Alex is away, which is unique. I've read quite a lot where Alex is there, and general Alex showing off insues.
I hope you're having a good summer! I'm a little bored... =D
I can't think of much to say, really. Not much action, just a filler and setting the table for the next chapter. You know, this will just get us to put more hopes on the next chapter.
But, YAY! You've updated! The writing is spotless grammar wise, at least as far as I can see over one reading. I really like how you have a terrorist organisation attack Brooklands when Alex is away, which is unique. I've read quite a lot where Alex is there, and general Alex showing off insues.
I hope you're having a good summer! I'm a little bored... =D
8/5/2011 c2 Hollyblue2
It won;t let me review this chapter twice and i'm re-reading it...
I do love the word Savvy... :)
Cool chapter... I'm still wondering why Namte hates Alex so much...I'm sure there's a valid reason :p
It won;t let me review this chapter twice and i'm re-reading it...
I do love the word Savvy... :)
Cool chapter... I'm still wondering why Namte hates Alex so much...I'm sure there's a valid reason :p
8/5/2011 c1 32HollyBlue2
I wonder if this Nate guy is not who you think he is...
I'll read on to find out :)
I wonder if this Nate guy is not who you think he is...
I'll read on to find out :)