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9/25/2010 c1 3itbehappypants
I really like it (: Keep going please!
9/24/2010 c1 tsukinotora
An interesting change, I must say refreshing. I want to see where this story goes. Be more careful wiht the typing; on line 13 an space is missing, between needed and to feel.
9/24/2010 c1 Bookworm0611
Love it so far! Cant wait for more.
9/24/2010 c1 3margaritama
Well, certainly a different Hermione and a determined girl, isn't she? She knows what she wants and is more than prepared to charge full force. I think this could set up for some very amusing encounters...LOL.

The only challenge I had was the years and years of wanting him. I was a touch confused by the timeline. She's in canon 7th year? Or the technical 8th? Is the war part of this story? I'm a bit thrown because the description of Draco sounds like 6th year. And unless Hermione has been sexually active since she was (I shudder) 13, being obsessed with Draco would really seem to entail only one year, unless this is the technical 8th year. I hope I've not confused you completely. Hoping you can clear it up as it was hard to follow in the opening. :-)
9/24/2010 c1 mjmusiclover
very very hot
9/23/2010 c1 5MagicallyEnchantedWords
Wow. Sexy!
9/23/2010 c1 Kiley
I want what she's going to get
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