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1/29/2017 c11 10Junior VB
No está mal.
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Not bad.
1/29/2017 c10 Junior VB
Nerissa escapó.
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Nerissa escaped.
1/29/2017 c7 Junior VB
Bloom derrotó a Phobos.
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Bloom defeated Phobos.
10/7/2016 c4 Junior VB
Will está decidida a ser una mejor líder.

Aparentemente Bloom y sus amigas no pueden tener un día libre, jaja.
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Will is determined to be a better leader.

Apparently Bloom and her friends can't have a normal holiday, haha.
7/14/2016 c2 Junior VB
Nerissa obtuvo su merecido.
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Nerissa got what she deserved.
7/14/2016 c1 Junior VB
Interesante idea.
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Interesting idea.
3/16/2013 c1 Da ninja
Ok I've been through the whole fic and some parts are disappointing,

First of all, as I said before Bloom and Will have been the centre of everything, whereas all the other characters like irma or Flora have been pushed into the backround and ignored.

Also lots of errors and some things don't make sense...
But that's ok because it's the actual story that matters, not the grammar.
Besides everyone makes mistakes...even me.
:D

That's all I have to b**** about...

...

...On the plus side, you are an amazing author, the words flow well and you know how to be descriptive enough for the reader to create a mental image...But not too descriptive as to bore the reader.

I wasn't expecting Phobos to be behind Bloom's kidnapping, that was a nice surprise from the usual predictability of Winx/W.i.t.c.h cross-overs.
Seriously, look at all the other xovers; Winx goes through a portal to earth (or Meridian), they meet W.i.t.c.h's enemies, they fight them, they meet W.i.t.c.h and team up...
Then they all live happily ever after.

Your story is different.. Something drew me to it, and that something is a good author...YOU!

So can you make a sequel, or as a previous receiver stated...have w.i.t.c.h go to Alfea.

...

You are obviously talented in writing, don't let those talents go to waste...

...and please WRITE MORE!SEQUEL! SEQUEL!SEEEEEEEQUUUUUEEEL!

:D
3/16/2013 c9 Gvhftr Kijl
Where's Layla?

Are you racist or something?
3/15/2013 c2 Da ninja
Yay!
Another witch/Winx xover!,
Ive always loved w.i.t.c.h, especially the animated series.
I'm just so sad that they cancelled.

I kinda like Winx, but the voice actors just ruined it for me,
I actually liked Tecnas voice before they changed it, it made her different from the other girls.
Also the voices have no expression in them and have delayed reactions.
The overall show is pretty good and the outfits are amazing.

I think the fact that Winx and W.i.t.c.h are so similar makes for a good crossover.
You have captured this perfectly and have written an amazing story so far!

Just one thing,
Please don't overpower Bloom or Will to much and distance them from their groups.
Most fanfics ruin the story by making Bloom or Will so powerful that they erase the need for the other w.i.t.c.h or Winx.

I find that the winx is too Bloom-centric and dosent feature the other girls that much, so please take the time to develop all the characters and that should make for a well-rounded fic.

I like that your story is fast-paced and has a lot of action and I'm only up to chapter 2,
please keep writing and carry on the awesome work!

:D
2/18/2013 c5 2Morphixgirl
I'm so confused. What season are both of them around? Like in w.i.t.c.h. Matt does have powers and in winx they go all the way to sirenix. And Nerrissa is beat... In w.i.t.c.h.
9/28/2010 c1 John Doe
Dude I like the story. I think this crossover is good. Keep up the good work and I look forward to more. Also I had a thought could you possibly have the Guardians go to Alfea as students. I just thought it would be interesting if they went there.
9/27/2010 c1 6PEJP Bengtzone
I suggest that you maybe should check out the movie, and the fourth season of Winx Club.

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