1/31/2012 c24 1shadow girls 100
the story was really good. i hope that you find time to finish it or add on to it.
the story was really good. i hope that you find time to finish it or add on to it.
1/29/2012 c24 Babysis64
well thanks this was a good update and i can't wait and don't worry everyone isn't a good speller for sure i know i'm not either oh well i still understood what you said and it is a good story so far keep it up until next time have a good week.
well thanks this was a good update and i can't wait and don't worry everyone isn't a good speller for sure i know i'm not either oh well i still understood what you said and it is a good story so far keep it up until next time have a good week.
1/25/2012 c24 5XxJasper'sAngelxX
Shame I feel sorry for Bella finding out about what her parents were like.
Shame I feel sorry for Bella finding out about what her parents were like.
1/24/2012 c24 11wolf lover of michigan
I really liked it, saw what you meant about the spelling. I too also have a hard time with spelling. I used a online dictionary that helped me a lot. Keep up the good work on the story, can't wait to see what happens with Sam and Bella and with Paul having a sister.
I really liked it, saw what you meant about the spelling. I too also have a hard time with spelling. I used a online dictionary that helped me a lot. Keep up the good work on the story, can't wait to see what happens with Sam and Bella and with Paul having a sister.
1/24/2012 c24 16emeralddragonjewel
love the story so far can't wait to read more about sam and bella,i didn't notice any typos or anything else so take your time with your story i'm pretty sure other authors can wait so take your time and i will be waiting to read the next chapter so i can review it
love the story so far can't wait to read more about sam and bella,i didn't notice any typos or anything else so take your time with your story i'm pretty sure other authors can wait so take your time and i will be waiting to read the next chapter so i can review it
1/24/2012 c24 2blackangel150
Damn their parents were Assholes, I'm glad their dead so now Bella has a family that loves her
Damn their parents were Assholes, I'm glad their dead so now Bella has a family that loves her