for my big bad wolf12/13/2015 c3 Guest
Is English not your first language, because you have a very bad writing style.
Is English not your first language, because you have a very bad writing style.
11/27/2015 c25 Guest
Yay
Yay
11/27/2015 c26 
3WarriorHeart90
We know life happens! Glad to have you back, and good luck on you writing!
3WarriorHeart90We know life happens! Glad to have you back, and good luck on you writing!
11/5/2015 c24 Italover
I'm sorry but your spelling is really really bad.. Maybe you should have had a beta or something? Your storyline is really good but I get a headache because of your spelling mistakes..
I'm sorry but your spelling is really really bad.. Maybe you should have had a beta or something? Your storyline is really good but I get a headache because of your spelling mistakes..
8/3/2015 c25 ashleyn
You can do this I belive in you sometimes I can spell bad to it is nothing to be sorry about you have so many people who look up to you and you are the reason I want to write a fan fiction you are amazing and inspiring to so many people do not second guess your self I love the part of the story were Paul the big bad wolf shows his soft side and the he was abuses and is bella's brother that was an amazing way to mix it up a keep your fans on there toes great work listen to cheerleader by ome to see how highly you fans think of you ; )
You can do this I belive in you sometimes I can spell bad to it is nothing to be sorry about you have so many people who look up to you and you are the reason I want to write a fan fiction you are amazing and inspiring to so many people do not second guess your self I love the part of the story were Paul the big bad wolf shows his soft side and the he was abuses and is bella's brother that was an amazing way to mix it up a keep your fans on there toes great work listen to cheerleader by ome to see how highly you fans think of you ; )
3/19/2015 c24 Guest
Sooo many run on sentences, from the first paragraph of Chapter 1, to the last paragraph of this chapter.
Spelling, grammar, punctuation, appropriate capitalization - these all need work.
Needs proofreading, editing, and perhaps a beta.
Sooo many run on sentences, from the first paragraph of Chapter 1, to the last paragraph of this chapter.
Spelling, grammar, punctuation, appropriate capitalization - these all need work.
Needs proofreading, editing, and perhaps a beta.