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9/29/2010 c1 14Uzumaki Ricky
WOW!
9/28/2010 c1 12wisdom-jewel
A few mistakes here and there, make sure you let the audiance know when you switch from third POV to a person's POV but other than that its a very good start.
9/26/2010 c1 2Hina the half heart
It is really good story however you're having trouble staying in perspective. Please choose either first or third. Switching back and forth lowers the quality of the story.
9/26/2010 c1 2missanimefever
wow...this is really good! are you going to continue from here?
9/26/2010 c1 ephemeralspring
Awesome chapter! It was kinda touching. So, continue or in other words, KEEP UPDATING!
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